WEBVTT 00:00.920 --> 00:01.560 OK. 00:01.590 --> 00:12.180 So now let's take the final steps just take the final steps to writing to writing the specific paragraphs 00:12.270 --> 00:14.760 for this process. 00:14.760 --> 00:15.180 All right. 00:15.240 --> 00:19.410 A lot of students struggle with the process like how to write two specific paragraphs with three and 00:19.410 --> 00:20.070 four. 00:20.340 --> 00:22.170 Well here's our process right here. 00:22.230 --> 00:24.550 About this warm gray. 00:24.590 --> 00:29.240 And we've already written our intrinsic are examples ever introductions. 00:29.490 --> 00:35.400 We've written our general paragraph where we talk about the different stages for one part of it and 00:35.400 --> 00:37.430 the different steps for another part. 00:37.760 --> 00:45.630 And now for The Journal paragraph just as it was for writing the table writing the general sorry writing 00:45.630 --> 00:48.690 this specific paragraph for the table and the line graph. 00:48.690 --> 00:56.380 We have to look at this process and we breaking it into two parts and one part to learn discuss for 00:56.490 --> 01:01.300 paragraphed going to be discuss paragraph 3 and the other part is going to be discussed for paragraph 01:01.300 --> 01:02.790 number four. 01:02.800 --> 01:08.470 So for us we have to look at the lifecycle of the silk worm and when we look at the lifecycle of the 01:08.470 --> 01:15.490 silk worm we're going to make that we're going to talk about those stages in our third paragraph and 01:15.490 --> 01:21.420 then our fourth paragraph we're going to talk about the stages of the production of these silk cloth. 01:21.870 --> 01:37.440 All right so as I said for our Paragraph 3 we're going to discuss the stages of the life cycle 01:44.470 --> 01:45.160 OK. 01:45.580 --> 01:47.860 And then for the fourth paragraph 01:50.530 --> 02:03.260 we're going to discuss the steps for making silk cloth. 02:03.610 --> 02:03.880 Right. 02:03.880 --> 02:15.010 So we break it down into parts of Paragraph 3 that makes our part 1 or paragraph 4 that makes our part 02:15.010 --> 02:16.310 two. 02:16.770 --> 02:22.690 And so we have our part 1 and we have our part to that we have here we have a Part 1 and we have our 02:22.690 --> 02:26.570 part 2 and then we just have to for part number three. 02:26.740 --> 02:30.720 We just have to describe the steps. 02:30.850 --> 02:32.090 Look at the risk. 02:32.260 --> 02:39.370 Describe the stages for these syllabi start right at Stage Number one where we can see that it lays 02:39.420 --> 02:51.370 X even 10 days later we get the silk worm the silk worm larva where they eat the Mulberry leaf for food. 02:51.730 --> 02:53.980 So that's what we're going to talk about. 02:54.150 --> 02:54.870 Right. 02:55.360 --> 02:56.220 So here we go. 02:56.230 --> 03:01.620 We're just going to describe that in stage one. 03:01.940 --> 03:04.420 We can see an adult 03:07.470 --> 03:12.190 silk worm laying eggs. 03:13.140 --> 03:35.200 And then 10 days later we have larva which will consume the leaf for nutrition. 03:35.790 --> 03:40.570 So we have it we've done 10 days later 03:48.410 --> 03:50.900 we have stage 03:53.630 --> 04:03.650 to where the larva will consume the leaf for nutrition. 04:03.850 --> 04:04.180 Right. 04:04.190 --> 04:08.240 So we have Stage 1 we have Stage 2 that's all which is really straightforward. 04:08.540 --> 04:15.180 A lot of students get confused by a process where processes are really easy. 04:15.180 --> 04:23.410 They're four to six weeks four to six weeks later and four to six weeks later and we come to station 04:23.550 --> 04:26.600 three where we have the silk. 04:26.780 --> 04:32.900 The lava is making silk thread and then three to four three to eight days later we have the Stage 4 04:33.650 --> 04:36.590 where it becomes a cocoon. 04:36.630 --> 04:40.640 There are 16 lead 16 days later as an adult. 04:40.940 --> 04:41.930 OK. 04:43.040 --> 04:44.350 So we have to talk about that 04:48.350 --> 04:48.720 right. 04:48.720 --> 04:50.320 So we just keep going. 04:55.130 --> 04:55.940 Where am I. 04:56.230 --> 04:58.010 OK here we go. 04:58.670 --> 05:04.160 Four to six weeks later we enter the 05:08.470 --> 05:18.280 third stage where the larva begins to create 05:30.530 --> 05:35.750 so great around itself. 05:36.870 --> 05:37.300 Right. 05:37.350 --> 05:42.920 What we're really what we really are seeing here is do you have the ability to look at this information 05:42.920 --> 05:45.080 and create sentences. 05:45.260 --> 05:46.720 Great sentences. 05:52.950 --> 05:58.320 Finally after three to eight days 06:09.430 --> 06:10.780 we have a 06:16.740 --> 06:17.440 comb 06:23.090 --> 06:25.580 in 16 days. 06:29.840 --> 06:30.270 Then 06:33.170 --> 06:35.330 16 days later 06:38.450 --> 06:41.150 an adult emerges 06:44.690 --> 06:50.330 to repeat the process. 06:50.410 --> 06:53.570 Then we have our paragraph free OK. 06:53.690 --> 06:59.220 We describe the process you describe the process of the silk worm. 06:59.440 --> 07:00.270 OK. 07:00.470 --> 07:01.930 We describe the process. 07:01.940 --> 07:03.290 You can see it there. 07:03.410 --> 07:08.570 All we did was go through by stages and we we talked about what we saw. 07:08.570 --> 07:10.320 We talked about what we saw. 07:10.750 --> 07:18.140 And then for paragraph four we do the exact same thing for paragraph number four we do the exact same 07:18.140 --> 07:19.990 thing for paragraph number four. 07:20.000 --> 07:23.300 We describe the process for paragraph number four. 07:23.780 --> 07:30.050 So as an assignment what I want you to try to do is to try to write your example or paragraph number 07:30.050 --> 07:35.600 four and we may use it in our list of examples from students or other students that are right in paragraph 07:35.600 --> 07:41.300 number four and you'll be able to compare your paragraph number four to what some of the other students 07:41.300 --> 07:47.530 have done to make sure you're able to write these these paragraphs properly have done paragraph 3. 07:47.740 --> 07:53.090 And I'm what you'd would want what I want you to do as a student is to try to do paragraph number four 07:53.450 --> 07:56.640 in terms of describing the steps for making the sailcloth. 07:56.930 --> 08:03.080 OK remember you remember to follow our rules in terms of it should be no more than two or three sentences. 08:03.340 --> 08:03.980 OK. 08:04.340 --> 08:10.070 So give us a shot and you'll be able to compare what you've done to other students and be able to see 08:10.070 --> 08:12.290 if you're on the right track of doing it correctly. 08:12.290 --> 08:12.900 All right. 08:13.130 --> 08:15.870 So I will I'll talk to you soon. 08:16.070 --> 08:19.840 And keep pressing keep moving forward you're doing great.