WEBVTT 00:01.500 --> 00:11.190 OK so now let's get into let's get into writing the overview for the table here for the table graph 00:11.190 --> 00:12.520 that we have right here. 00:12.630 --> 00:19.390 Table So really a table graph really where it's just a table or table graph. 00:20.010 --> 00:26.760 It's just a table until you consider you know your teachers make mistakes a little here is here and 00:26.760 --> 00:30.810 there but I correct and no one's perfect and not expect to be perfect. 00:30.810 --> 00:35.100 That's why if you want to you can get a score of nine as the people think you have to be perfect for 00:35.100 --> 00:36.170 a score of nine. 00:36.370 --> 00:37.440 No you don't. 00:37.440 --> 00:41.760 Look you're entitled to some mistakes because we're all human. 00:41.800 --> 00:45.250 All right now we're at the table we already have the introduction here. 00:45.630 --> 00:49.640 And you know the introduction captures just kind of what it's about. 00:49.710 --> 00:50.180 OK. 00:50.220 --> 00:54.870 And now we move on to the general overview here where we have a general overview what we're doing is 00:54.870 --> 00:57.260 the same process it does. 00:57.280 --> 01:03.090 We're looking at we're looking at the table we're looking at what was or what are what are our highs 01:03.090 --> 01:03.970 and lows. 01:04.170 --> 01:05.840 And there are a couple of different ways we can do it. 01:05.850 --> 01:15.120 When we're talking about a general overview we can look at we can look at each category like food housing 01:15.120 --> 01:20.190 clothing you look at the high and low for food high and low for housing the high and low for clothing 01:20.600 --> 01:22.890 the high and low for entertainment. 01:22.920 --> 01:32.070 We can do it we can do it that way in terms of looking at in general what are our highest and our lowest 01:32.070 --> 01:33.440 percentages. 01:33.790 --> 01:34.510 Okay. 01:34.650 --> 01:38.210 So we can we can take it by by category. 01:38.520 --> 01:44.580 And if you're going to take it by category look at in general for each category this is what our studies 01:44.580 --> 01:48.000 are what our sentences will look like 02:05.840 --> 02:08.960 basically in the food category. 02:09.120 --> 02:09.900 Spain 02:12.620 --> 02:13.470 and Germany 02:18.500 --> 02:24.210 are by the highest and lowest 02:27.630 --> 02:28.710 percentages 02:36.650 --> 02:44.760 while in the housing section of spending. 02:46.280 --> 02:54.780 These cuts are taken by on those in the housing. 02:55.060 --> 02:56.360 The U.S. is Germany 03:00.620 --> 03:03.960 and the lowest is Spain. 03:06.710 --> 03:11.180 So what we can do here is we can say well the housing section of the spending. 03:11.520 --> 03:12.590 You know we can say 03:17.770 --> 03:20.290 we can see a reversal 03:24.760 --> 03:38.260 of these cuts in Germany and Spain because Germany is now at the lowest of the highest in housing in 03:38.260 --> 03:40.090 Spain is at the bottom. 03:40.090 --> 03:40.450 All right. 03:40.450 --> 03:43.720 So you can see that in this sentence. 03:43.930 --> 03:46.330 We cover the high and low for food. 03:46.330 --> 03:48.620 We covered the high and low for housing. 03:49.000 --> 03:49.580 OK. 03:49.900 --> 03:56.060 And that's why that's why it's really helpful to be with the right compound and complex sentences. 03:56.080 --> 04:02.050 It's really really helpful to be able to do that if you can if you can accomplish that you can really 04:02.500 --> 04:09.490 be able to cut down on how many sentences you're writing and be able to show a high level of English 04:09.490 --> 04:10.170 writing. 04:10.450 --> 04:11.440 Now we're going to move on. 04:11.440 --> 04:12.650 Let's take a look at the route. 04:12.660 --> 04:18.130 Remember the general overview paragraph we're not talking about percentages you don't see any numbers 04:18.130 --> 04:19.430 yet. 04:19.430 --> 04:20.070 Right. 04:20.350 --> 04:24.390 You don't see any numbers and you shouldn't be writing any numbers yet. 04:24.460 --> 04:29.520 We don't get into the percentages or the numbers until we get to the third and fourth paragraph. 04:29.530 --> 04:36.280 Keep keep keep harping on that I keep saying that over and over but it has kind of missed that sometimes 04:36.280 --> 04:41.360 we don't get into the numbers until we get into our third and fourth paragraph. 04:41.710 --> 04:42.110 All right. 04:42.100 --> 04:46.480 And in the second paragraph in the general overview keep it general. 04:46.690 --> 04:47.390 OK. 04:47.650 --> 04:57.520 Keep in general so with the clothing we can see what's the the low is France for clothing and the high 04:57.520 --> 04:58.560 is Germany 05:12.380 --> 05:24.340 not 05:35.640 --> 05:47.600 citizens of France. 05:50.940 --> 05:54.150 All right so that's a sentence about clothing. 05:54.270 --> 05:57.590 Now some students say Well can I just write a sentence for each category. 05:57.820 --> 06:03.350 When you're what what happens is when you're writing too many sentences you're taking time. 06:03.610 --> 06:05.650 OK you can take time. 06:05.770 --> 06:11.170 You have to learn how to write compound in complex sentences also because it's going to increase your 06:11.170 --> 06:12.170 grade. 06:12.610 --> 06:18.070 If you're writing all simple sentences if you're writing all simple sentences you're going to take a 06:18.070 --> 06:19.190 lot of time. 06:19.590 --> 06:20.230 OK. 06:20.230 --> 06:24.910 And also you're going to show a lower level of English ability. 06:24.910 --> 06:25.840 All right. 06:25.840 --> 06:29.110 So you've got to mix it up and you got to show variety. 06:29.770 --> 06:37.030 OK in our last sentence for the general overview we're looking at entertainment and entertainment we 06:37.030 --> 06:42.110 can see that Germany spends the most on entertainment and Turkey spends the least 07:00.480 --> 07:03.120 in the area of entertainment. 08:01.260 --> 08:09.320 And we've covered everything we covered how we cover food and housing we cover clothing and we cover 08:09.320 --> 08:10.860 it. 08:10.950 --> 08:13.370 We cover entertainment be a small eat 08:16.860 --> 08:24.180 and there are multiple ways to do this because we see that Germany because we see that Germany is the 08:24.180 --> 08:29.110 most in three different categories we could have done it that way. 08:29.370 --> 08:37.690 Another another way of writing another way of writing this overview paragraph right. 08:37.710 --> 08:45.810 Another way of writing this overview paragraph let's call this example one of the overview paragraph 08:46.920 --> 08:53.690 and now look at another way we could have written the overview paragraph here. 08:55.010 --> 09:01.740 For example two of the overview paragraph you look at another one we could have written have written 09:01.740 --> 09:07.710 the overview paragraph in terms of the second example we could write 09:14.630 --> 09:15.900 into categories 09:19.600 --> 09:22.050 of housing 09:24.360 --> 09:33.070 clothing and entertainment. 09:33.540 --> 09:34.500 Germans 09:36.970 --> 09:45.150 spend more than citizens in any other country. 09:45.450 --> 09:46.080 Right. 09:46.290 --> 09:47.850 You got that. 09:48.870 --> 09:50.910 OK. 09:52.230 --> 09:58.990 And then we can move on and talk about we could talk about our our bottom now. 09:59.130 --> 10:01.470 You talk about However 10:05.280 --> 10:06.450 when it comes 10:09.930 --> 10:10.410 to 10:13.650 --> 10:27.120 when it comes to others category of clothing France clothes the Congo France 10:31.110 --> 10:31.950 has 10:35.520 --> 10:38.100 the lowest percentage 10:47.070 --> 10:54.100 France has the lowest percentage and for entertainment 10:57.800 --> 11:02.410 for entertainment that we can't find 11:04.780 --> 11:12.420 Turkey in this position as a final point 11:21.780 --> 11:22.530 Spain 11:25.860 --> 11:29.360 spins the high us. 11:29.480 --> 11:42.090 Now for us to pin the least in 11:47.930 --> 11:51.420 housing. 11:52.700 --> 11:59.460 So there we have two examples of doing the overview paragraph two examples of doing the overview paragraph. 12:01.040 --> 12:01.870 OK. 12:02.090 --> 12:10.580 Those are are two examples of doing it both work and both capture the both of these examples capture 12:11.030 --> 12:19.560 the general information that we see the general information that we see in this in this the general 12:19.580 --> 12:22.270 information that we see in the table here. 12:22.450 --> 12:23.180 OK. 12:23.420 --> 12:26.270 And it's a really good example of really how to do it. 12:26.420 --> 12:27.550 OK. 12:28.220 --> 12:36.140 And one of the benefits of doing this course is you get to send me an example for a task number one 12:36.140 --> 12:37.580 for me to look at. 12:37.640 --> 12:41.810 You get to see one example of a task number one for me to look at and make sure you're doing it correctly 12:42.310 --> 12:48.050 and you also get an opportunity to send me an example of your task number two to look at and see if 12:48.050 --> 12:49.540 you do it correctly. 12:49.550 --> 12:57.260 So that's a difference in terms of our course is we actually will look at your examples and be able 12:57.260 --> 12:59.810 to tell you if you're doing it correctly or not. 13:00.180 --> 13:00.710 Thank you all. 13:00.740 --> 13:08.600 We also have peer review where you're able to submit your examples for peer review then your peers will 13:08.600 --> 13:11.990 help you to examine to see if you're doing it correctly. 13:12.140 --> 13:12.730 OK. 13:13.130 --> 13:14.300 All right. 13:14.300 --> 13:17.220 So let's stop and move on to another general overview.