WEBVTT 00:02.090 --> 00:02.610 Everyone. 00:02.610 --> 00:08.450 Now let's go ahead and write Cowra specific body paragraphs for this table example. 00:08.910 --> 00:15.270 As you can see by now when we're doing the specific comparisons we're talking about our third and fourth 00:15.270 --> 00:16.470 paragraphs. 00:16.500 --> 00:23.340 Our introduction is our first per our first paragraph our general overview is our second paragraph. 00:23.340 --> 00:28.440 And then when we get to our third and fourth paragraphs when we get to our third or fourth paragraph 00:28.440 --> 00:32.820 that's where we make specific comparisons of the numbers. 00:33.140 --> 00:37.580 So we're going to make specific comparisons of the numbers here. 00:38.100 --> 00:42.930 And so when you look at this third and fourth paragraph about I'm about to do for you right now we're 00:42.960 --> 00:46.350 going to compare numbers now. 00:46.920 --> 00:49.790 I think it's a good it's a good idea. 00:49.890 --> 00:58.360 I think it's a good idea to follow the example to follow your general overview. 00:58.490 --> 01:04.890 Right to follow your general overview and we we're talking about following your general overview the 01:04.920 --> 01:09.320 race there that's part of the overview we don't need that for here. 01:09.480 --> 01:15.990 We're talking about doing our general overview and our general overview we talked about we can we talked 01:15.990 --> 01:18.190 about generally about food and housing. 01:18.320 --> 01:21.380 And then we talked generally about clothing and entertainment. 01:21.390 --> 01:26.250 So when you're doing your specific paragraphs you don't want to break them into two categories here 01:26.250 --> 01:27.970 we have four categories. 01:28.080 --> 01:30.520 So we're just going to break them into two parts. 01:30.660 --> 01:34.990 So we're going in here again in our third or fourth paragraphs. 01:35.070 --> 01:37.050 This is where we compare the numbers. 01:37.050 --> 01:40.090 This is where we do comparisons of the numbers. 01:40.230 --> 01:49.800 So for Paragraph 3 we're going to compare numbers 01:52.620 --> 02:02.290 for the food and housing why we're following the same format of our overview. 02:02.310 --> 02:05.990 That way we're going to have really good cohesion and really good coherence. 02:06.030 --> 02:10.330 We're following the same overview format. 02:10.530 --> 02:25.720 And then for the paragraph 4 we're going to compare numbers for the clothing and entertainment. 02:26.340 --> 02:27.220 Right. 02:27.600 --> 02:29.230 So you can see where we're at. 02:29.250 --> 02:35.040 Well what would what we're talking about here is where I was showing you I'm showing you with this one 02:35.640 --> 02:43.890 how you can really go about having good good good coherence good cohesion in your writing where it looks 02:43.890 --> 02:44.600 great. 02:44.840 --> 02:45.360 Okay. 02:45.570 --> 02:51.780 So now we're going to compare the numbers for the food and housing and we're going to make sentences 02:52.260 --> 02:58.880 and here in the third or fourth paragraph is where we're going to really get into comparing our numbers. 02:59.250 --> 02:59.650 Okay. 02:59.670 --> 03:04.110 So here we go in terms of number of comparisons. 03:04.390 --> 03:04.910 Okay. 03:05.190 --> 03:09.450 So as we look at it again we're not we're not really talking about high and low here that's not what 03:09.450 --> 03:14.340 our discussion we should be going through and saying the high here the low here the high here the low 03:14.340 --> 03:14.850 here. 03:15.150 --> 03:16.080 That's not what it's about. 03:16.110 --> 03:20.140 It's about comparing our our numbers. 03:20.490 --> 03:21.170 Okay. 03:21.360 --> 03:24.360 It was about comparing our numbers. 03:24.540 --> 03:27.020 So this is what it will look like. 03:27.360 --> 03:27.760 All right 03:48.650 --> 03:49.480 a 04:25.150 --> 04:31.690 right there is our first sentence here we actually need to make a correction in our overview. 04:32.510 --> 04:33.070 Okay. 04:33.070 --> 04:37.980 Because actually Spain is not the top because Turkey 04:47.540 --> 04:49.380 Turkey is at the top everybody. 04:49.390 --> 04:51.800 Turkey is at the top. 04:51.800 --> 04:53.430 Turkey is the top in food. 04:53.520 --> 04:56.380 And Germany is at the bottom in food and drink. 04:56.450 --> 04:57.350 OK. 04:57.890 --> 05:05.090 And one of my good students actually pointed that out to me that I made a small mistake in doing that 05:06.450 --> 05:11.590 Turkey is at 36 percent and Spain is at 31 percent higher. 05:11.600 --> 05:14.750 So we have our comparison of the numbers here. 05:14.790 --> 05:15.790 All right. 05:16.190 --> 05:25.220 And we also can talk about in terms of with Germany and France. 05:29.480 --> 05:31.330 You can say that 05:40.230 --> 05:41.010 Germany 05:45.390 --> 05:51.920 France Germany France and the U.K. 05:56.060 --> 05:58.480 actually thought about Germany and the U.K. 06:04.190 --> 06:06.980 U.K. we had a 06:10.290 --> 06:14.160 Germany in the U.K. We have a 5 percent 06:23.290 --> 06:24.160 difference 06:26.800 --> 06:28.020 in spending 06:31.190 --> 06:31.730 10 06:38.850 --> 06:45.860 is on 22 percent. 06:46.470 --> 06:54.180 So that's what we were looking at right now so far in terms of our food and housing now and the housing 06:54.810 --> 06:57.300 that's for food we look at the housing. 06:57.360 --> 06:57.710 Why. 06:57.720 --> 07:05.640 Because we can we can look at it and we can say that we can look at the U.K. in Turkey for someone make 07:05.640 --> 07:07.400 those comparisons. 07:07.410 --> 07:10.140 The U.K. is at 37 percent in Turkey is 20 percent 07:13.730 --> 07:14.060 pay 07:18.230 --> 07:27.440 for housing the UK spends 17 percent more 07:32.280 --> 07:37.040 17 percent more to Turkey 07:39.830 --> 07:42.370 UK. 07:43.730 --> 07:49.360 Mysterious worse than Turkey is at the bottom 07:52.430 --> 07:56.480 here this week. 08:05.980 --> 08:09.570 See. 08:11.160 --> 08:13.180 Here you can see 08:15.690 --> 08:16.240 Germany 08:21.280 --> 08:32.880 and France at the bottom with only a 2 percent difference. 08:34.490 --> 08:43.850 33 percent vs. 30 percent. 08:44.540 --> 08:51.760 So there's an example of our paragraph 3 in terms of us comparing numbers. 08:52.100 --> 08:58.190 We compare numbers here and then for paragraph four we would do the same thing in terms of comparing 08:58.190 --> 09:01.290 numbers for the clothing and the entertainment. 09:01.700 --> 09:07.760 All right and so the paragraph for I'm not going to write the paragraph for what I'm going to ask you 09:07.760 --> 09:14.970 to do as students are to go ahead is to go ahead and write right paragraph number four. 09:15.240 --> 09:23.540 OK I want to look at this table right here and I want you all I want you as a student to try to make 09:23.540 --> 09:26.330 comparisons of the pickup number four. 09:26.490 --> 09:27.620 I saw what I have. 09:27.620 --> 09:33.080 I'm having Stuka I'm having students try to do examples of paragraph number four in terms of making 09:33.080 --> 09:40.400 the comparisons and sending them to us and we're going to add it to a list of students that are making 09:40.400 --> 09:42.180 comparisons of Number Four. 09:42.440 --> 09:43.300 I'm going to make. 09:43.340 --> 09:51.560 I'm going to make edits and make edits to their examples of paragraph them before so you can see how 09:51.860 --> 09:54.210 the paragraphs number before can be improved. 09:54.270 --> 10:02.560 OK I'll be making videos of it talking about some of those edits for the paragraph number four for this 10:02.600 --> 10:03.290 example. 10:03.340 --> 10:10.910 OK so as a student in the course I'm giving you an assignment going in a paragraph number four. 10:11.000 --> 10:17.510 Make them make the final paragraph of making making specific comparisons of the numbers for the clothing 10:17.540 --> 10:21.040 and the entertainment part of the table. 10:21.120 --> 10:26.440 OK all right so I'll talk to you soon and thanks a lot for participating.