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OK so now let's move on.

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Look at how to do the specific paragraphs for this bar graph here.

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Now as I've told you we we've already done the introduction and we did the introduction there and did

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our general paragraph her general overview paragraph and now we have to do our specific paragraphs.

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We have two specific paragraphs or paragraph three paragraph four for these paragraphs.

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We have to look at the bar chart and we want to break it into two parts who want to break it into two

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parts.

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And so what we can do is we can have a third paragraph that maybe discusses the years 2009 to 2011 and

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then we have our fourth paragraph discussed the year 2013 and will we're going to do is we're going

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to break it.

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We're going to break it into two parts and here and our third and fourth paragraphs.

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This is where this is where we end up discussing this where we end up discussing the discussing the

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US the numbers we discuss the specific numbers the specific percentages if they're already percentages.

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But this is where this happens that happens in our third and fourth paragraphs.

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OK.

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So take a look at this example and we want to just make some general comparisons of the numbers.

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You're not going to be able to compare everything.

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OK.

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You're not going to be able to compare every single number that's not what they're asking you to do.

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That's not what they're asking you to do.

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They're not asking you to make your comparisons that way.

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OK.

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They're not they're not.

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That's not what they're they're generally are asking you to do it now.

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Then there are a different number of ways you can break it up you can break it you can break your paragraphs

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down into years or you if you want to you can break your comparing your paragraphs down into categories

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where maybe in paragraph number three you talk about Samsung and Apple and in paragraph number four

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you talk about Nokia in ZTE.

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So there are a number of different ways that you can make specific comparisons of the numbers.

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All right but that's what these these these third and fourth paragraphs are.

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OK so I'm going to break it down.

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We can do it both ways we can.

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We can break it down by categories.

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You know Samsung Apple and Nokia we can look at those and make comparisons of those.

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And then we can talk about the LG and ZTE or others.

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And I think that's what I'll do I'll break it down into categories like categories.

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So in our Paragraph

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3 we're going to compare Samsung Apple and Nokia Samsung

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Apple and Nokia we're going look at all three of those and Paragraph 3 and then in paragraph four we're

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going to look at ZTE who is ZTE and LG are going to look at LG and Zee TV.

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All right.

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So that's how we're going to look at it.

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OK.

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And we're going to make our comparison to bring a look at our numbers.

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Now when you're making compare when you're making a comparison of numbers here we don't just talk about

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we don't just talk about we don't just talk about the numbers we don't talk about the numbers in terms

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of what's the high what's the low that's not what we're doing here.

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OK.

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So we're not just we can't just look at it and say OK now it's Rigaud high low high low high low.

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Right.

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Get specific in your comparisons.

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All right so that's how this how we're going to do what you're going to see.

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So let's start off by looking at we're looking at the katak we're looking at three cat three different

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group and say we're looking at Samsung Apple and Nokia in this third paragraph.

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So first I'm looking at two thousand and nine and I can see that Samsung has about 250 million.

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OK Samsung has about $250 million.

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And Nokia has about 450 million.

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So for 2009 that's an interesting comparison that I can make.

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OK.

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And we can see Apple is barely registering.

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Apple is barely on the map but I don't have to talk about them at all.

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I have to talk about everything.

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So again my first paragraph I wanted to talk about I'm going to say in my third paragraph I must start

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off by saying that

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as a first specific detail to look at comic book you'll see that same song.

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So 50 million more units than sorry Nokia Nokia has sold

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50 million more units than Samsung.

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I see that.

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Where did I get that number from.

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Nokia has up is at about 450 million and Samsung.

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I would say is that about 250 million.

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I'm not going to say about because we can't say exactly they don't give us the exact But that's an example

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of a sentence we could write for comparison.

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Right you make comparisons make comparisons make comparisons don't just say this is how this is all

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this is don't do that.

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Don't repeat the general overview paragraph is what I'm saying.

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Don't repeat the general overview paragraph.

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That's not what you're supposed to do.

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That's not what you're being asked to do.

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Ok then so now let's look at the year 2011 for 2011.

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We can say that Apple's 90 million Samsung is maybe at around you know 300 in 50 million or 300 and

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40 million.

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Nokia is at around maybe 420 million.

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What we have to make estimates here we have to make estimates here.

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We have to make estimates here.

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So one way you can say it if Samsung is just over 300 million.

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And Apple is under 90 million.

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They did the year 2011.

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We can write a sentence that looks like this.

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Moving on to the year 2011

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you can look at

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2009 that

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that

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same song is

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so just over

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300 million

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which is

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three times more

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three times more than Papel which appears

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to have pushed out just under 100 million that year

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right.

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So that's an example of a comparison

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OK you say I'll work on making comparisons of the numbers comparisons of the numbers everybody not going

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into high and low.

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Now I'm going to move on.

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Now look at 2013 in 2013 right.

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In our last year we can see that Samsung continues to rise and hits a high all time high at about 450

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million.

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Whereas Nokia has dropped whereas Nokia has dropped loggy has dropped from just over 400 million to

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about 250 million

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of 2013.

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You can see that the numbers of Apple and Samsung continue

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to continue to rise.

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But Nokia has fallen from just over 400 million.

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No here has fallen

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from just over 400 million to 200 and 50 million units.

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So that's an example that's an example of what a paragraph will look like to a specific paragraph will

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look like in his paragraph 3 we see comparisons of the numbers now with paragraph 4.

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We would do the exact same thing and we're going to be making comparisons of the numbers for LG and

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ZTE.

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OK.

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So that's one way we can go about doing it.

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OK we can we can do it that way in terms of making some interesting comparisons of numbers making some

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interesting comparisons of numbers.

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Like I said he did it in terms of breaking it down into categories.

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You could also break it down into years which is fine also.

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He can break it down into years.

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OK so in terms of this fourth paragraph here I'm not going to do the fourth paragraph what I want you

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to do is I want you to go ahead and try to write your own example of the fourth paragraph making making

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comparisons of LG and ZTE in terms of comparing the numbers and I will do it and they want to know what

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to do some analysis of some of the samples and we're going to add them into our stew our student examples

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of how to do these third and fourth paragraphs.

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OK so I want you to look at this bar chart here.

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When you look at this bar chart here this right here on the screen.

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I want you to try to go ahead and write your fourth paragraph making the comparisons sendiri and we're

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going to add it to our list of other students that may could have make comparisons so that we can all

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see together how to really write a really good paragraph of comparisons.

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OK.

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So right I will talk to you soon.

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And thanks so much for participating in our course.

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We're going to look at another example of doing the specific paragraphs.

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All right.

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Thank you.