OK so now let's move on.
Look at how to do the specific paragraphs for this bar graph here.
Now as I've told you we we've already done the introduction and we did the introduction there and did
our general paragraph her general overview paragraph and now we have to do our specific paragraphs.
We have two specific paragraphs or paragraph three paragraph four for these paragraphs.
We have to look at the bar chart and we want to break it into two parts who want to break it into two
parts.
And so what we can do is we can have a third paragraph that maybe discusses the years 2009 to 2011 and
then we have our fourth paragraph discussed the year 2013 and will we're going to do is we're going
to break it.
We're going to break it into two parts and here and our third and fourth paragraphs.
This is where this is where we end up discussing this where we end up discussing the discussing the
US the numbers we discuss the specific numbers the specific percentages if they're already percentages.
But this is where this happens that happens in our third and fourth paragraphs.
OK.
So take a look at this example and we want to just make some general comparisons of the numbers.
You're not going to be able to compare everything.
OK.
You're not going to be able to compare every single number that's not what they're asking you to do.
That's not what they're asking you to do.
They're not asking you to make your comparisons that way.
OK.
They're not they're not.
That's not what they're they're generally are asking you to do it now.
Then there are a different number of ways you can break it up you can break it you can break your paragraphs
down into years or you if you want to you can break your comparing your paragraphs down into categories
where maybe in paragraph number three you talk about Samsung and Apple and in paragraph number four
you talk about Nokia in ZTE.
So there are a number of different ways that you can make specific comparisons of the numbers.
All right but that's what these these these third and fourth paragraphs are.
OK so I'm going to break it down.
We can do it both ways we can.
We can break it down by categories.
You know Samsung Apple and Nokia we can look at those and make comparisons of those.
And then we can talk about the LG and ZTE or others.
And I think that's what I'll do I'll break it down into categories like categories.
So in our Paragraph
3 we're going to compare Samsung Apple and Nokia Samsung
Apple and Nokia we're going look at all three of those and Paragraph 3 and then in paragraph four we're
going to look at ZTE who is ZTE and LG are going to look at LG and Zee TV.
All right.
So that's how we're going to look at it.
OK.
And we're going to make our comparison to bring a look at our numbers.
Now when you're making compare when you're making a comparison of numbers here we don't just talk about
we don't just talk about we don't just talk about the numbers we don't talk about the numbers in terms
of what's the high what's the low that's not what we're doing here.
OK.
So we're not just we can't just look at it and say OK now it's Rigaud high low high low high low.
Right.
Get specific in your comparisons.
All right so that's how this how we're going to do what you're going to see.
So let's start off by looking at we're looking at the katak we're looking at three cat three different
group and say we're looking at Samsung Apple and Nokia in this third paragraph.
So first I'm looking at two thousand and nine and I can see that Samsung has about 250 million.
OK Samsung has about $250 million.
And Nokia has about 450 million.
So for 2009 that's an interesting comparison that I can make.
OK.
And we can see Apple is barely registering.
Apple is barely on the map but I don't have to talk about them at all.
I have to talk about everything.
So again my first paragraph I wanted to talk about I'm going to say in my third paragraph I must start
off by saying that
as a first specific detail to look at comic book you'll see that same song.
So 50 million more units than sorry Nokia Nokia has sold
50 million more units than Samsung.
I see that.
Where did I get that number from.
Nokia has up is at about 450 million and Samsung.
I would say is that about 250 million.
I'm not going to say about because we can't say exactly they don't give us the exact But that's an example
of a sentence we could write for comparison.
Right you make comparisons make comparisons make comparisons don't just say this is how this is all
this is don't do that.
Don't repeat the general overview paragraph is what I'm saying.
Don't repeat the general overview paragraph.
That's not what you're supposed to do.
That's not what you're being asked to do.
Ok then so now let's look at the year 2011 for 2011.
We can say that Apple's 90 million Samsung is maybe at around you know 300 in 50 million or 300 and
40 million.
Nokia is at around maybe 420 million.
What we have to make estimates here we have to make estimates here.
We have to make estimates here.
So one way you can say it if Samsung is just over 300 million.
And Apple is under 90 million.
They did the year 2011.
We can write a sentence that looks like this.
Moving on to the year 2011
you can look at
2009 that
that
same song is
so just over
300 million
which is
three times more
three times more than Papel which appears
to have pushed out just under 100 million that year
right.
So that's an example of a comparison
OK you say I'll work on making comparisons of the numbers comparisons of the numbers everybody not going
into high and low.
Now I'm going to move on.
Now look at 2013 in 2013 right.
In our last year we can see that Samsung continues to rise and hits a high all time high at about 450
million.
Whereas Nokia has dropped whereas Nokia has dropped loggy has dropped from just over 400 million to
about 250 million
of 2013.
You can see that the numbers of Apple and Samsung continue
to continue to rise.
But Nokia has fallen from just over 400 million.
No here has fallen
from just over 400 million to 200 and 50 million units.
So that's an example that's an example of what a paragraph will look like to a specific paragraph will
look like in his paragraph 3 we see comparisons of the numbers now with paragraph 4.
We would do the exact same thing and we're going to be making comparisons of the numbers for LG and
ZTE.
OK.
So that's one way we can go about doing it.
OK we can we can do it that way in terms of making some interesting comparisons of numbers making some
interesting comparisons of numbers.
Like I said he did it in terms of breaking it down into categories.
You could also break it down into years which is fine also.
He can break it down into years.
OK so in terms of this fourth paragraph here I'm not going to do the fourth paragraph what I want you
to do is I want you to go ahead and try to write your own example of the fourth paragraph making making
comparisons of LG and ZTE in terms of comparing the numbers and I will do it and they want to know what
to do some analysis of some of the samples and we're going to add them into our stew our student examples
of how to do these third and fourth paragraphs.
OK so I want you to look at this bar chart here.
When you look at this bar chart here this right here on the screen.
I want you to try to go ahead and write your fourth paragraph making the comparisons sendiri and we're
going to add it to our list of other students that may could have make comparisons so that we can all
see together how to really write a really good paragraph of comparisons.
OK.
So right I will talk to you soon.
And thanks so much for participating in our course.
We're going to look at another example of doing the specific paragraphs.
All right.
Thank you.