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OK.

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So now let's take a look at another example of how to do the child's introduction and for this one we're

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looking at a situation where we have two charts right here we have a bar chart.

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There's talking about men and women and we have a pie chart.

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OK.

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And so a lot of students asked me Well how do you do it if you have two charts.

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Does your method does your strategy change.

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Does does your strategy change Kino when I say no.

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Right the strategy it doesn't matter if you are looking at a pie chart a multiple chart or die it doesn't

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matter.

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The strategy the strategy that I'm teaching you is consistent for every single type that you're going

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to do.

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So it doesn't matter.

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OK.

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You can look at the examples that I'm using in teaching you how to do.

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And just follow my examples and you're going to be OK.

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You can be consistent in your method consistent in your strategy right and that's going to help you

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to do a good job.

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So take a look here.

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Up here is telling us in general we're what we're looking at because as the bar chart below shows the

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numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education center in the year

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2009.

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The pie chart gives you information about the ages of these course participants.

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Now as I've said as I've said you cannot just simply take this information and just repeat it as your

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introduction.

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You cannot do that.

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You can't.

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OK I shouldn't have to explain to you why.

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Right.

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But I will anyway.

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It is called plagiarism.

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OK.

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If you just take these words and copy them you're plagiarizing.

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You're not using your own words.

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More than that.

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You're not showing any English variety at all.

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You're not showing any English ability in the English test.

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And even more so students that don't understand English very well what they do is just copy this information

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here.

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That's what they do.

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They just copy this.

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They just copy this information right here they copy it right.

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That's what students do who don't know English.

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They just copy that information.

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Look I and that's why they get low scores.

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That's where the scores of four or five.

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OK you got to show English ability.

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You have to show English abilities.

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So when we look at this we're looking at it and we have to we have two types two types.

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We have to describe first we're going to write a sentence first we're going to write a sentence describing

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or write a sentence describing what the bar chart is about.

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And then we're going to write a sentence describing what the pie chart is about.

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OK.

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All right so let's take a look at that and you'll get a good idea of what the pie chart and the Barta

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pie chart in a bar chart are about.

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So it's right for us as we look at it we know we're dealing with an evening course in our education.

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When we look at it we see we have four different categories drama paintings sculpture language.

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We have the number of people on the bar chart going from zero to 40.

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We have men and women.

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OK so we're going to make a sentence describing that

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so there's our first sentence for the bar chart.

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OK this is our first for the bar chart and then we have to have a second sentence that gives some information

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about the pie chart.

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Right.

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So that's our introduction right here.

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We have an introduction that is made we have an introduction that is made up of.

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We have an introduction that's made up of those made up of a bar chart in a pie chart and we have two

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sentences like I told you your introduction.

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The only time where I wrote were really I get into introductions that are composed of two sentences

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are when we have two different graphs we have to look at are two charts we have to look at it like in

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this situation here.

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All right but that is our basic introduction that we can do as you can see our one sentence described

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in one sentence describing the bar chart.

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I wrote another sentence describing the pie chart.

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All right.

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And so there we go.

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There we have it.

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So I will talk to you soon.

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And thank you so much for your participation.

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All right.

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Talk to you some.
