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OK so now.

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So now we're looking at doing the overview for this graph.

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We've already done the introduction.

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We have our introduction right there.

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And I talked to you about how when you have multiple graphs like this for your introduction you need

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to do two sentences.

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You know you do need to do one sentence describing the bar chart that you need to do another says a

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sentence describing the pie chart.

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Now if you're really talented you can describe Humboldt's in one sentence using a compound complex sentence

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that if you can really show the ability ability to do that you can really score some good points with

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the graders.

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OK but for a general overview right the general overview is where we look at the bar chart in the pie

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chart and look at what do we see in general.

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What are our what are our highs and lows that we have to look at and remember our general paragraph

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our general overview paragraph would be two to three sentences no more than that.

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The reason why limit the amount of sentences to write is it allows you to answer the question completely.

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And also it allows you to finish on time and give the grid the correct amount of words.

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Writing more does not mean better.

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Ok writing a whole lot of sentences and not finishing it with a horrible job is not good.

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All right so I'm showing you the process.

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Do it the way that I'm telling you to do it and you'll be able to get a really good score.

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All right.

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So we were looking at this one first we look at the bar chart and we look at we have men and women.

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So let's look at it and say well for the women was the high the high for the women in sculpture.

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The high for women is sculpture and the low for the women.

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No I'm sorry the high dive for the women is language in the low for women of sculpture the high for

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the men is painting.

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The low for the man is drama.

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It looks like actually drama and sculpture low for the men.

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So those are the highs and lows.

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We'll look at the percentages the lowest percentage is 420 and the highest percentage is for over 50.

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So we take that information and we're going to create our sentences.

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We're going to create our sentences using using that information.

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OK.

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So we're going to going to create our sentences.

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All right.

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So

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lease incurs in the

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sculpture class.

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OK so there we have our first sentence about the women right in terms of the women choosing to say de-link

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language class the most showing the least interest in the skulker class.

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The Brownlee and the sculpture

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and then we have our

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sort of the

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archive for the last number means there we have here we have three sentences that describe our general

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overview of our three sentences to describe a general overview.

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We talked about the high and low for the women we talked about the high and low for the men and we have

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to do a third sentence now for the pie chart.

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The final point.

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And there we go.

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Well we did a general overview.

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We did a general overview and we captured everything right there.

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So sometimes when you have a double chart you can take a little bit more in terms of the sentences and

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doing it but you can see here that we've captured everything in our general overview.

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You talked about the high and low for the for the Barkshire.

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We talk about the high and low for the pie chart and this is what it will look like right.

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OK.

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So now move on and we'll do a nother general overview paragraph or a different one.

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I'm doing it this way so I can show you that process and procedure don't change the process or procedure

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don't change it stays the same it stays consistent.

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It doesn't matter it doesn't matter.

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You know what time you have to do.

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OK so now let's move on and let's keep.
