WEBVTT 00:00.570 --> 00:01.800 OK everybody. 00:01.920 --> 00:05.700 Now we are going into a live example. 00:05.700 --> 00:13.650 So if you don't hear me talking as much on this live example is because I'm actually writing. 00:13.740 --> 00:14.550 OK. 00:14.940 --> 00:24.330 And so I'll I'll talk when I'm able to talk but I want to write a letter live so that what I write it 00:24.360 --> 00:34.140 I want to write the letter live so that you're able to really see live action writing in C see a letter 00:34.190 --> 00:37.250 as it's being developed part by part. 00:37.620 --> 00:38.940 OK. 00:38.940 --> 00:42.690 So that's the purpose of this OK is being written. 00:42.690 --> 00:47.910 Life is not being written it's not being stopped and explained. 00:47.910 --> 00:54.740 I did that already and I gave you five examples stopping and explaining each part. 00:54.750 --> 00:56.910 This is a live letter. 00:56.910 --> 01:04.380 There won't be a lot of talking but the purpose of it is just to show you the progression from part 01:04.470 --> 01:06.160 to part 2 part. 01:06.390 --> 01:07.490 OK. 01:07.740 --> 01:08.190 All right. 01:08.250 --> 01:11.160 So here we go. 01:11.820 --> 01:21.660 The letter says write a letter to your friend about your plans to go out with him or her and another 01:21.660 --> 01:23.370 friend on a small picnic. 01:23.370 --> 01:29.530 Include the following in your letter where you plan to go what arrangements you already made. 01:29.760 --> 01:32.860 What help you need from your friend with this picnic. 01:33.050 --> 01:38.770 So of course the first thing we're going to start out with doing is doing an outline. 01:39.180 --> 01:45.570 OK and we're going to have our different parts or part one. 01:45.690 --> 01:56.740 I want to go to I want to go to Yellowstone National Park. 01:57.150 --> 02:04.770 You know you'll probably use these outlines maybe in some of the other lectures that I'm doing and some 02:04.770 --> 02:13.550 examples maybe Yellowstone National Park or two. 02:14.250 --> 02:18.070 I want to check the weather. 02:19.070 --> 02:20.940 Call the entry fee 02:23.700 --> 02:29.130 use or place an order of the food. 02:29.130 --> 02:34.680 Now I'm writing all these down as examples but it doesn't necessarily mean I'm going to use all this 02:34.680 --> 02:35.300 information. 02:35.310 --> 02:41.340 I'm just trying to really put down some ideas that I could write about so that I don't have to try to 02:41.340 --> 02:45.120 think about these ideas while I am writing. 02:45.360 --> 02:52.110 That way I can really focus on how I want to say something and not have to really think about what I 02:52.110 --> 02:55.200 want to say and that's going to help her to be better. 02:55.620 --> 03:00.140 So there we have an outline in outline needs to be done in less than a minute. 03:00.770 --> 03:06.000 You're going to be hand writing but you should be able to get it done in less than a minute. 03:06.000 --> 03:10.280 You definitely can get it done in less than a minute if you're really practicing. 03:10.280 --> 03:10.530 Right. 03:10.530 --> 03:18.900 So it is a letter to your friend to my letter to your friend about your plans to go out with him or 03:18.900 --> 03:19.280 her. 03:19.320 --> 03:25.050 And a nother friend on a small picnic. 03:25.710 --> 03:25.930 All right. 03:25.950 --> 03:27.720 Those letters are my friend. 03:28.200 --> 03:29.420 OK. 03:30.240 --> 03:33.730 So let's get started. 03:33.800 --> 03:34.390 It's a 03:37.830 --> 03:39.120 dear will you. 03:39.130 --> 03:42.500 You're right my friend name my friends named William. 03:42.500 --> 03:47.320 And so we're going to start out with our introduction 03:57.210 --> 03:58.880 the time of year again 04:10.780 --> 04:12.120 her annual get together 04:29.890 --> 04:30.580 so 04:40.110 --> 04:46.410 right a look at our opening sentence Hey Will is that time of year again when we have our annual get 04:46.410 --> 04:50.240 together and this year we've decided on a traditional American picnic. 04:50.280 --> 04:52.510 So we need to discuss our program. 04:52.700 --> 04:54.830 Right our plans are program. 04:54.840 --> 04:56.360 That's an introduction for you. 04:56.640 --> 04:59.100 You see the language is informal. 04:59.100 --> 05:06.540 Now I need to go into this next part about where where we're going to go where are the where's the plan 05:06.540 --> 05:06.900 to go 05:20.030 --> 05:21.920 because we need to first think about 05:27.520 --> 05:30.040 really Picnik should take place. 05:39.010 --> 05:43.540 And there are so many options including 05:47.630 --> 05:54.210 in this life some having to correct some mistakes as I go but not limited to 06:00.080 --> 06:03.620 the beach 06:06.300 --> 06:09.930 Houghton's or 06:15.390 --> 06:18.780 desert I got to be careful right. 06:18.780 --> 06:20.960 Desert or not desert there. 06:21.110 --> 06:21.620 OK. 06:21.670 --> 06:24.120 There's an opening sentence about where we want to go. 06:24.130 --> 06:25.930 That's the first thing we have to think about. 06:26.270 --> 06:28.240 Here's where we want to go. 06:35.760 --> 06:50.210 Luckily a has all of these locations but since it's my turn to do so this year 06:53.120 --> 07:01.280 I feel that we should pick the lake in beautiful 07:05.940 --> 07:07.410 beautifully famous 07:10.410 --> 07:16.220 Yellowstone Park. 07:16.300 --> 07:16.720 So 07:19.480 --> 07:23.710 there we have our our our part of our sentence. 07:23.770 --> 07:29.280 Sentence about where we're going to have our picnic. 07:29.550 --> 07:30.080 Right. 07:30.110 --> 07:32.850 The location here we have two sentences. 07:32.860 --> 07:35.440 Remember it can be two to three sentences. 07:35.470 --> 07:36.560 OK. 07:43.230 --> 07:45.230 Moving on to other matters. 07:45.810 --> 07:46.110 Right. 07:46.110 --> 07:48.600 That's good coherence language there. 07:52.220 --> 07:53.760 And you see the contractions 08:02.240 --> 08:03.470 contractions 08:23.960 --> 08:24.710 right. 08:24.730 --> 08:31.860 So there we see a good opening sentence for our next part about the arrangements that I've already made. 08:31.910 --> 08:32.570 Right. 08:32.960 --> 08:38.840 You get the idea from that topic sentence about the arrangements that have already been made. 08:50.060 --> 08:55.220 See I assume we'll talk about the weather 08:58.430 --> 09:03.440 check the weather and also 09:08.780 --> 09:17.450 call the park we want what I'm typing to always type all 40 I don't know why do I need to fix my fingers. 09:45.310 --> 09:48.150 I made a reservation 09:50.700 --> 09:58.550 for a sweet spot colloquial language next to the candy and 10:07.120 --> 10:07.940 camcorder 10:10.540 --> 10:13.320 and food like Lebanese food. 10:13.960 --> 10:14.840 OK. 10:15.220 --> 10:15.630 All right. 10:15.640 --> 10:18.930 There's our second part about the arrangement I've made. 10:19.000 --> 10:23.470 Now this one has three sentences the previous one or two sentences. 10:23.470 --> 10:24.060 Right. 10:24.310 --> 10:29.560 But you see the the the amount of words are about the same. 10:29.570 --> 10:39.880 All right so now we are moving into our next part which is what help do I need from my friend and the 10:39.880 --> 10:47.760 other why the other guy about what other help do I need having done my part. 10:52.550 --> 10:56.730 I just need a little bit. 10:57.110 --> 11:09.290 Look at the relex language the tone a little bit of extra help from my partner. 11:10.130 --> 11:11.060 Right. 11:11.600 --> 11:12.080 So 11:14.900 --> 11:15.380 will you 11:17.980 --> 11:29.750 please x your wife your lovely wife good to have her appear if we can 11:32.540 --> 11:35.630 borrow her 11:38.470 --> 11:42.380 checkered like kids who 11:45.830 --> 11:49.870 didn't feel right. 11:55.030 --> 11:56.740 Martin Martin is the other guy 12:12.390 --> 12:18.630 Martin needs to do a bit more 12:22.410 --> 12:27.750 and bring along the drinks. 12:28.020 --> 12:31.050 Here we go some parallelism bring along the drinks. 12:38.550 --> 12:43.310 The music period and 12:45.950 --> 12:51.440 help me drive out to the choir. 12:52.130 --> 12:56.180 We are making him do a lot of work. 12:56.270 --> 13:01.240 All right we finished that paragraph and then we have our conclusion. 13:01.640 --> 13:03.480 OK. 13:04.200 --> 13:09.440 That's a contraction. 13:10.160 --> 13:15.050 We all know the plan of action. 13:15.140 --> 13:18.740 Exclamation point. 13:18.740 --> 13:22.890 See you guys soon. 13:29.830 --> 13:30.890 All the best. 13:30.890 --> 13:32.200 Informal language 13:37.770 --> 13:39.850 Big Mike Big Mike is writing again. 13:40.240 --> 13:40.870 OK. 13:41.010 --> 13:43.180 So there we have it everybody. 13:43.230 --> 13:48.350 We have an informal letter written from beginning to end right. 13:48.540 --> 13:50.130 From beginning to end. 13:50.550 --> 13:59.070 And as you see again we have all the parts we have all the necessary parts to be able to write a really 13:59.070 --> 14:01.340 solid letter. 14:01.800 --> 14:07.320 And if we look at our letter so many words we have here to. 14:07.580 --> 14:08.500 Right. 14:09.060 --> 14:11.760 219 words right. 14:11.790 --> 14:13.610 I don't know if they count the dear William or not. 14:13.620 --> 14:16.020 I don't think they do too T'ien. 14:16.080 --> 14:16.520 All right. 14:16.620 --> 14:27.480 So this is an example of how you should write a letter from beginning to end this as an informal letter 14:28.160 --> 14:34.080 and I just want to kind of take you through it from beginning to end to show you how we go part by part 14:34.170 --> 14:36.020 by part by part. 14:36.060 --> 14:38.430 This is how you have to write everybody. 14:38.700 --> 14:42.460 So I hope this live example was very helpful for you. 14:42.480 --> 14:43.730 Talk to you soon.