OK everybody.
Now we are going into a live example.
So if you don't hear me talking as much on this live example is because I'm actually writing.
OK.
And so I'll I'll talk when I'm able to talk but I want to write a letter live so that what I write it
I want to write the letter live so that you're able to really see live action writing in C see a letter
as it's being developed part by part.
OK.
So that's the purpose of this OK is being written.
Life is not being written it's not being stopped and explained.
I did that already and I gave you five examples stopping and explaining each part.
This is a live letter.
There won't be a lot of talking but the purpose of it is just to show you the progression from part
to part 2 part.
OK.
All right.
So here we go.
The letter says write a letter to your friend about your plans to go out with him or her and another
friend on a small picnic.
Include the following in your letter where you plan to go what arrangements you already made.
What help you need from your friend with this picnic.
So of course the first thing we're going to start out with doing is doing an outline.
OK and we're going to have our different parts or part one.
I want to go to I want to go to Yellowstone National Park.
You know you'll probably use these outlines maybe in some of the other lectures that I'm doing and some
examples maybe Yellowstone National Park or two.
I want to check the weather.
Call the entry fee
use or place an order of the food.
Now I'm writing all these down as examples but it doesn't necessarily mean I'm going to use all this
information.
I'm just trying to really put down some ideas that I could write about so that I don't have to try to
think about these ideas while I am writing.
That way I can really focus on how I want to say something and not have to really think about what I
want to say and that's going to help her to be better.
So there we have an outline in outline needs to be done in less than a minute.
You're going to be hand writing but you should be able to get it done in less than a minute.
You definitely can get it done in less than a minute if you're really practicing.
Right.
So it is a letter to your friend to my letter to your friend about your plans to go out with him or
her.
And a nother friend on a small picnic.
All right.
Those letters are my friend.
OK.
So let's get started.
It's a
dear will you.
You're right my friend name my friends named William.
And so we're going to start out with our introduction
the time of year again
her annual get together
so
right a look at our opening sentence Hey Will is that time of year again when we have our annual get
together and this year we've decided on a traditional American picnic.
So we need to discuss our program.
Right our plans are program.
That's an introduction for you.
You see the language is informal.
Now I need to go into this next part about where where we're going to go where are the where's the plan
to go
because we need to first think about
really Picnik should take place.
And there are so many options including
in this life some having to correct some mistakes as I go but not limited to
the beach
Houghton's or
desert I got to be careful right.
Desert or not desert there.
OK.
There's an opening sentence about where we want to go.
That's the first thing we have to think about.
Here's where we want to go.
Luckily a has all of these locations but since it's my turn to do so this year
I feel that we should pick the lake in beautiful
beautifully famous
Yellowstone Park.
So
there we have our our our part of our sentence.
Sentence about where we're going to have our picnic.
Right.
The location here we have two sentences.
Remember it can be two to three sentences.
OK.
Moving on to other matters.
Right.
That's good coherence language there.
And you see the contractions
contractions
right.
So there we see a good opening sentence for our next part about the arrangements that I've already made.
Right.
You get the idea from that topic sentence about the arrangements that have already been made.
See I assume we'll talk about the weather
check the weather and also
call the park we want what I'm typing to always type all 40 I don't know why do I need to fix my fingers.
I made a reservation
for a sweet spot colloquial language next to the candy and
camcorder
and food like Lebanese food.
OK.
All right.
There's our second part about the arrangement I've made.
Now this one has three sentences the previous one or two sentences.
Right.
But you see the the the amount of words are about the same.
All right so now we are moving into our next part which is what help do I need from my friend and the
other why the other guy about what other help do I need having done my part.
I just need a little bit.
Look at the relex language the tone a little bit of extra help from my partner.
Right.
So
will you
please x your wife your lovely wife good to have her appear if we can
borrow her
checkered like kids who
didn't feel right.
Martin Martin is the other guy
Martin needs to do a bit more
and bring along the drinks.
Here we go some parallelism bring along the drinks.
The music period and
help me drive out to the choir.
We are making him do a lot of work.
All right we finished that paragraph and then we have our conclusion.
OK.
That's a contraction.
We all know the plan of action.
Exclamation point.
See you guys soon.
All the best.
Informal language
Big Mike Big Mike is writing again.
OK.
So there we have it everybody.
We have an informal letter written from beginning to end right.
From beginning to end.
And as you see again we have all the parts we have all the necessary parts to be able to write a really
solid letter.
And if we look at our letter so many words we have here to.
Right.
219 words right.
I don't know if they count the dear William or not.
I don't think they do too T'ien.
All right.
So this is an example of how you should write a letter from beginning to end this as an informal letter
and I just want to kind of take you through it from beginning to end to show you how we go part by part
by part by part.
This is how you have to write everybody.
So I hope this live example was very helpful for you.
Talk to you soon.