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OK everybody this question you see on the screen here this is a test question for you.

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OK.

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So I have placed this question here and what you want to do is read through the question.

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It says you had some building work done in your home but you are unhappy with the outcome.

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Write a letter to the builder and say describe the work done why you are not happy and what do you want

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the builder to do about it.

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All right.

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So this is a test question for you.

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So what you can do is you can do one of two things.

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You can write your letter on paper or you can type all on the computer if you want to but you need to

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do it under test conditions right.

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That means on a 20 minute clock do it on a 20 minute clock.

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Make sure that you follow the steps and procedures that I laid out for you about how to do a general

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letter.

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Make sure that you're aware of what I talked about and discussed in regards to keys to getting a high

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score.

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Try to model what I did remember.

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Tone and language are very very important.

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Right now what you can do is you can you know type your version of the letter and then post your version

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of the letter in the comments and other students can take a look at your letter.

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People can make a comment about a letter I may or may not make comments on the letter it depends.

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There are going to be a lot of submissions.

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So understand may not be able to comment on everybody's submission.

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OK I'm going to say that again the purpose of this is for you to just make your submission for other

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students to see it and take a look at if I'm able to you know.

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And you're lucky enough I will be able to make some comments on your letter.

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But again I cannot promise that I will look at and be able to comment on every single letter that is

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placed here.

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What you want to be able to do is maybe look at the comments on some of the letters that I am able to

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review at it and be able to take a look at what changes are suggested and in what I thought should be

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made done differently to the to the letter that was submitted.

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All right.

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So I'm going to say it a third time if you submit a copy of what you've done.

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It may or may not get reviewed.

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The purpose of it is for other students to look at what you've done to make comments about it.

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And sometimes when I'm able I can maybe make comments on them also.

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OK.

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All right.

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So I said that so many times so people won't write me and say you didn't make comments.

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I'm telling you now I'm not going I may not be able to.

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That's not the purpose of this.

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All right.

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So go ahead and set your clock for 20 minutes and do your best.

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You can submit if you want to or not submit.

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And then I will hopefully if I'm if I'm able take a look at it if I'm not.

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Don't get offended.

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There's no there's nothing personal.

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OK.

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So do your best and good luck.
