OK in this second example everyone's going to look at in terms of application of strategy and tactics
is a semi formal letter again strategy does it change strategy does not change tactics do not change.
We still have our parts are five parts.
However this is semi-formal and you'll see the language is not quite so formal as the previous letter
but is not necessarily informal as if you're writing towards a friend.
OK.
So I hope you can see some of those differences in terms of that.
Now as you see here the letter reads you and your family are moving to another country and you are looking
for rented accommodation there.
Write a letter to a property agent in your letter.
Introduce yourself and your family part 1.
Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find part to give your preference for the location
of the accommodation.
Part 3.
Then it says they were right.
The first thing we have there is our outline racers make a quick plan remember your outline needs to
be like one minute.
OK.
Do a really good outline.
Part 1.
Introducing oneself lawyer wife daughter 3 kids part 2 adult one from the accommodation two story three
bathrooms garden five bed rooms where inner city near parks and schools.
So I outlined what I'm going to talk about.
All right.
I already have the ideas in mind of what I want to say.
So Dear Sir Madam if Now some people ask me well can I put a person's name.
Sure you can.
You can semi-free semi-formal you can say.
Dear Ms Williams.
Dear Mrs. Williams That's okay too.
Now introduction you don't as I'm starting out with a compound sentence right.
Note showing the grader hey I can do a compound sentence.
My family and I are relocating to a new country and require expert assistance to acquire leased property
in the area desert.
That's a good introduction right there.
And we have a great compound sentence showing my ability.
Remember that's what you're doing for the exam you're showing your English ability next part introducing
as a starting point.
I am a renowned lawyer and will be matriculating with my lovely wife and three wonderful children aged
10 12 and 16 right there which we in that sentence you see a great use of an adverb.
Lovely.
You see a great we're matriculating is semi-formal right.
So you think I should use language like that because as a semi-formal letter we consider ourselves to
be very to be very active family which is evident from our participation in kayaking cycling tennis
and baseball.
Two things we see there that's why I underlined it adjective clause and also we I'm so we have a complex
sentence here and we have evidence of parallelism proper parallelism kayaking cycling tennis and baseball.
Again quality of your writing the quality of your writing higher level quality quality quality of your
writing.
Moving on next part about describing the type of accommodation.
Moving onto the heart of the matter connecting language.
You see that coherence.
Moving on to the heart of the matter.
We need numerous factors satisfied from the rental property in our new nation without question.
Connecting language we must acquire a two story home that has at least five bedrooms larger connections
indoor spa and three bathrooms.
Further considerations.
Look at that looking I can look at that connecting language right.
All that kind of language.
Further considerations.
That's the kind of language that Beale's coherence.
That's what a logical progression is.
Right that's proper progression that you all read all those words but a lot of you don't know how to
apply it right.
This course that I've designed is about application of strategy and tactics application right.
Further considerations must be given must be given my wife must be given.
Actually there should be let's make that correction.
There should be must be given
must be given should be must be given.
We should make that correction now must be given to to my wife being a professional gardener to my way
being a professional gardener.
Actually this might look better for you guys right.
This might look better for you guys.
Maybe I'll keep it like this for the next one.
Also I think you actually concealed a bit better with a like this than in the other full screen mode
so we might keep it like this for the next ones.
Further considerations must be given to my wife being a professional gardener and thus the home should
have a large backyard for agricultural purposes.
We have to address started final part in terms of where where do I want the accommodation.
Part 3 we have never visited this country so we need your assistance with finding the perfect neighborhood
location to be more specific.
We hope you can secure your house in a neighborhood that is surrounded by large parks and top rated
schools.
Lastly the suburbs are nice.
However our preferences are residents in the inner city right.
Look at the word choice.
Look at the sentence type sentence types look at the words that build coherence that connect the good
connecting language.
We have high expectations and hope you locate the accommodations that we absolutely need in moving to
a new country.
Sincere thanks right.
That's what again what a good letter is going to look like right.
That's the kind of language that you want.
Right there is the letter and I think a thing for the next lectures.
I'll keep it whites.
I'll keep it wide screen like this and of full screen I think we could see a little bit better this
way.
We have our quit plan we have for our introduction opening language are three part 1 paragraph part
2 paragraph part 3 paragraph conclusion.
OK but there are our parts.
That's our semi-formal.
Same strategy same structure everybody.
OK so we're now going to move into our third example and the third example I believe is going to be
a informal letter but we'll see.
I believe it is but I'll talk to you soon.
I hope you're learning a lot.
I hope you are getting the idea of what to do and I hope that you try to apply what I'm teaching is
all about your ability to apply strategy not just learning in a reading it application.
All right.
So I'll talk to you soon.