WEBVTT 00:00.910 --> 00:08.940 OK in this second example everyone's going to look at in terms of application of strategy and tactics 00:09.450 --> 00:19.650 is a semi formal letter again strategy does it change strategy does not change tactics do not change. 00:19.740 --> 00:24.010 We still have our parts are five parts. 00:24.120 --> 00:32.850 However this is semi-formal and you'll see the language is not quite so formal as the previous letter 00:33.330 --> 00:38.680 but is not necessarily informal as if you're writing towards a friend. 00:38.760 --> 00:39.520 OK. 00:40.080 --> 00:44.580 So I hope you can see some of those differences in terms of that. 00:44.630 --> 00:51.960 Now as you see here the letter reads you and your family are moving to another country and you are looking 00:51.960 --> 00:54.360 for rented accommodation there. 00:54.480 --> 00:58.040 Write a letter to a property agent in your letter. 00:58.350 --> 01:01.700 Introduce yourself and your family part 1. 01:01.830 --> 01:07.560 Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find part to give your preference for the location 01:07.590 --> 01:08.670 of the accommodation. 01:08.730 --> 01:10.130 Part 3. 01:10.410 --> 01:11.990 Then it says they were right. 01:12.000 --> 01:17.430 The first thing we have there is our outline racers make a quick plan remember your outline needs to 01:17.430 --> 01:18.930 be like one minute. 01:19.460 --> 01:20.100 OK. 01:20.300 --> 01:22.890 Do a really good outline. 01:22.920 --> 01:23.700 Part 1. 01:23.700 --> 01:31.680 Introducing oneself lawyer wife daughter 3 kids part 2 adult one from the accommodation two story three 01:31.680 --> 01:38.600 bathrooms garden five bed rooms where inner city near parks and schools. 01:38.640 --> 01:41.590 So I outlined what I'm going to talk about. 01:41.590 --> 01:42.290 All right. 01:42.330 --> 01:46.520 I already have the ideas in mind of what I want to say. 01:47.960 --> 01:55.220 So Dear Sir Madam if Now some people ask me well can I put a person's name. 01:55.220 --> 01:56.480 Sure you can. 01:56.780 --> 01:59.110 You can semi-free semi-formal you can say. 01:59.120 --> 02:00.890 Dear Ms Williams. 02:01.040 --> 02:04.970 Dear Mrs. Williams That's okay too. 02:05.420 --> 02:11.260 Now introduction you don't as I'm starting out with a compound sentence right. 02:11.370 --> 02:17.990 Note showing the grader hey I can do a compound sentence. 02:18.130 --> 02:24.550 My family and I are relocating to a new country and require expert assistance to acquire leased property 02:24.670 --> 02:27.430 in the area desert. 02:27.440 --> 02:29.360 That's a good introduction right there. 02:30.430 --> 02:36.880 And we have a great compound sentence showing my ability. 02:37.300 --> 02:45.000 Remember that's what you're doing for the exam you're showing your English ability next part introducing 02:46.060 --> 02:47.490 as a starting point. 02:47.770 --> 02:53.700 I am a renowned lawyer and will be matriculating with my lovely wife and three wonderful children aged 02:53.710 --> 03:00.610 10 12 and 16 right there which we in that sentence you see a great use of an adverb. 03:00.640 --> 03:01.790 Lovely. 03:02.050 --> 03:06.910 You see a great we're matriculating is semi-formal right. 03:06.980 --> 03:14.500 So you think I should use language like that because as a semi-formal letter we consider ourselves to 03:14.500 --> 03:22.180 be very to be very active family which is evident from our participation in kayaking cycling tennis 03:22.300 --> 03:23.730 and baseball. 03:23.800 --> 03:30.400 Two things we see there that's why I underlined it adjective clause and also we I'm so we have a complex 03:30.400 --> 03:41.140 sentence here and we have evidence of parallelism proper parallelism kayaking cycling tennis and baseball. 03:41.140 --> 03:50.680 Again quality of your writing the quality of your writing higher level quality quality quality of your 03:50.680 --> 03:52.660 writing. 03:52.870 --> 03:56.980 Moving on next part about describing the type of accommodation. 03:57.460 --> 04:00.250 Moving onto the heart of the matter connecting language. 04:00.250 --> 04:03.220 You see that coherence. 04:03.220 --> 04:04.950 Moving on to the heart of the matter. 04:05.200 --> 04:11.500 We need numerous factors satisfied from the rental property in our new nation without question. 04:11.500 --> 04:18.490 Connecting language we must acquire a two story home that has at least five bedrooms larger connections 04:18.520 --> 04:21.630 indoor spa and three bathrooms. 04:21.760 --> 04:23.240 Further considerations. 04:23.260 --> 04:27.940 Look at that looking I can look at that connecting language right. 04:28.030 --> 04:29.560 All that kind of language. 04:29.560 --> 04:31.600 Further considerations. 04:31.600 --> 04:35.010 That's the kind of language that Beale's coherence. 04:35.110 --> 04:38.200 That's what a logical progression is. 04:38.530 --> 04:45.280 Right that's proper progression that you all read all those words but a lot of you don't know how to 04:45.280 --> 04:48.180 apply it right. 04:48.280 --> 04:56.400 This course that I've designed is about application of strategy and tactics application right. 04:56.620 --> 05:03.170 Further considerations must be given must be given my wife must be given. 05:03.190 --> 05:06.970 Actually there should be let's make that correction. 05:07.320 --> 05:09.070 There should be must be given 05:12.880 --> 05:18.820 must be given should be must be given. 05:18.820 --> 05:29.190 We should make that correction now must be given to to my wife being a professional gardener to my way 05:29.200 --> 05:31.870 being a professional gardener. 05:31.930 --> 05:35.250 Actually this might look better for you guys right. 05:35.260 --> 05:36.390 This might look better for you guys. 05:36.400 --> 05:38.200 Maybe I'll keep it like this for the next one. 05:38.200 --> 05:43.120 Also I think you actually concealed a bit better with a like this than in the other full screen mode 05:43.180 --> 05:46.920 so we might keep it like this for the next ones. 05:47.080 --> 05:51.850 Further considerations must be given to my wife being a professional gardener and thus the home should 05:51.850 --> 05:56.860 have a large backyard for agricultural purposes. 05:56.860 --> 06:03.400 We have to address started final part in terms of where where do I want the accommodation. 06:03.400 --> 06:10.600 Part 3 we have never visited this country so we need your assistance with finding the perfect neighborhood 06:10.690 --> 06:14.230 location to be more specific. 06:14.230 --> 06:19.090 We hope you can secure your house in a neighborhood that is surrounded by large parks and top rated 06:19.090 --> 06:20.230 schools. 06:20.230 --> 06:22.220 Lastly the suburbs are nice. 06:22.300 --> 06:26.590 However our preferences are residents in the inner city right. 06:26.860 --> 06:28.330 Look at the word choice. 06:28.330 --> 06:34.780 Look at the sentence type sentence types look at the words that build coherence that connect the good 06:34.780 --> 06:37.800 connecting language. 06:38.050 --> 06:44.110 We have high expectations and hope you locate the accommodations that we absolutely need in moving to 06:44.110 --> 06:44.940 a new country. 06:44.970 --> 06:47.840 Sincere thanks right. 06:48.310 --> 06:54.230 That's what again what a good letter is going to look like right. 06:54.310 --> 06:57.130 That's the kind of language that you want. 06:57.870 --> 07:02.620 Right there is the letter and I think a thing for the next lectures. 07:02.850 --> 07:04.090 I'll keep it whites. 07:04.090 --> 07:08.410 I'll keep it wide screen like this and of full screen I think we could see a little bit better this 07:08.410 --> 07:10.060 way. 07:10.060 --> 07:19.180 We have our quit plan we have for our introduction opening language are three part 1 paragraph part 07:19.180 --> 07:22.860 2 paragraph part 3 paragraph conclusion. 07:23.490 --> 07:26.100 OK but there are our parts. 07:26.140 --> 07:27.340 That's our semi-formal. 07:27.340 --> 07:30.750 Same strategy same structure everybody. 07:31.000 --> 07:38.770 OK so we're now going to move into our third example and the third example I believe is going to be 07:38.770 --> 07:41.080 a informal letter but we'll see. 07:41.110 --> 07:43.770 I believe it is but I'll talk to you soon. 07:43.780 --> 07:45.610 I hope you're learning a lot. 07:45.670 --> 07:51.730 I hope you are getting the idea of what to do and I hope that you try to apply what I'm teaching is 07:51.760 --> 07:59.300 all about your ability to apply strategy not just learning in a reading it application. 07:59.340 --> 07:59.840 All right. 07:59.920 --> 08:01.080 So I'll talk to you soon.