OK everybody let's move into our final practice question.
This is another practice question for us to consider and what we're going to be looking at is here a
formal letter dealing with a.
But it's about a neighbor.
But we're writing to the local council right.
So it is.
Don't be confused about it being an informal letter it's a formal letter we're writing to a local council
about something this is a serious matter.
All right.
So it says here you have a neighbor who is often burning rubbish at your house write a complaint about
it to the local council and say what is happening.
How is your family harmed by that.
What could be the solution in your opinion.
And of course we always start with our outline.
Right.
So we have to first address why is what is happening.
Lighting a fire gasoline in the can on the ground the harm fumes illness Long's vision.
What can be the solution.
Find them.
Give warning the clean.
So we always do an outline because doing an outline and doing an outline really helps you to organize
and structure your thoughts.
Right.
And so now we moved down into our introduction.
The purpose of this letter is to bring your attention bring to your attention important action and improper
action I'm sorry by my unruly neighbor John Smith who is lighting a fire at his house to burn various
types of garbage.
Right now we have to first talk about what exactly is happening.
But look at our introduction.
Very solid introduction everything we need is there very to the point.
OK.
This obnoxious neighbor is igniting his rubbish on a nightly basis.
And below you will read the details of what is happening.
Topic sentence.
Do you have the idea of what is about to come and what this paragraph is about.
Mr. Smith has a large front yard and each night he takes in he Each night he takes a large white plastic
bag of trash dumps it on the grass pours gasoline and ignites the entire amount as the fire burns he
continues to pour more gasoline on the flame in an attempt to eliminate any evidence of the burned trash.
Move on to the next part about the health risk.
Ladies and gentlemen of the council his actions have become a serious health concern for many members.
Many of my many of my family members my parents who were in their 60s have been complaining of breathing
and vision problems vision problems over the last couple of weeks even more concerning is that my son
who used to live who used to play with his friends in the courtyard has stopped going out to play because
of because of the fumes and polluted air.
So you see the parts right.
You see all the parts as a council you have several options.
But as as they start you should first give Well you should get well written.
You should give him very well what are we missing everybody we're missing an article.
We should give him a well written request to cease and desist.
If that does not work if that does not work.
A second suggestion would be that the council used his power to find him heavily until he complies with
your requests.
Now what is missing here right.
What is missing here.
How many parts do we have here.
We have five parts.
We have four parts we're missing.
What we're missing are conclusion.
So when we do a conclusion our conclusion is very strict to the point
where immediate action to be taken.
Right.
So we just add in a simple straightforward simple straightforward conclusion.
Right.
And that's all we have to do.
One sentence 3 3 3 1.
OK.
That's what a good solid letter looks like.
Is nothing more than that.
All right.
So I hope that you have really learned from the application.
Write the application of these of the strategies and tactics and you've had a chance to see them at
work.
All right.
So thank you very much.
That will conclude section 2 and then I'm gonna move on to a couple of live examples of showing you
writing in action live.
OK.
So I'll talk to you soon.
Take care.