OK.
Let's go ahead and move forward to to look at the introduction examples and please look at how we demonstrate
a high score method the introduction is very important because it lays out the general idea of the essay
it lays out the specific question being addressed or the controversy being addressed in the question
and then also puts forth your position and how you're going to explain your position.
So when a greater looks in your introduction they should see all three of those things.
OK so let's have a look.
Here is our degree.
Agree or disagree.
Question.
Full time university students spend most of the time studying they should be doing other activities
to what extent do you agree or disagree I completely disagree.
And you can see our outline right there that we did earlier.
Now in some of these introductions one thing you're going to notice is that you might see the thesis
statement written a little differently than I wrote it before.
The reason why I'm doing that is I dislike to give you sometimes a different look at how to write it
right.
I like to try to show you as many different methods and styles and ways to write thesis statements and
topic sentences and introductions and body paragraphs.
So sometimes I change it up just to give you a different viewpoint.
Now here's this introduction the stages of life require difficult choices and university lifestyle is
an example of a situation that requires challenging decisions.
Most students fall either fall into the camp of other uninterrupted focus on studying and others participate
in out of class explorations.
If a firm choice between the two camps must be made a student should stick to the books because that
is what is required for a high GPA and better opportunities after graduation.
There is a solid three sentence introduction write three sentence introduction very good sentence quality
very good word usage we cover the general idea the specific question and also we have our thesis statement
there.
Right.
So you know you're writing three sentences.
I'm writing three sentences and really what makes a difference between somebody getting a really high
score and somebody doing so so is the quality of the work the quality of the work.
A lot of times students want to ask me about where are my ideas there.
Do I have all the right sentences there.
Well yeah of course you might have the right sentences there but let's talk about the quality of your
work.
What kind of quality are you putting out.
Now let's take a look at the.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Question the qualities of a person needs the product the qualities a person needs to become successful
in today's world can not be learned at a university or similar academic institution to what extent do
you agree or disagree.
Here I mainly agree right.
Here is the introduction right.
The goal of every high school college or graduate degree individual is to become successful in life
however some practitioners of success theory believe that some skills for success can not be addressed
or acquired outside of school.
In fact this is mainly true.
There is my position because sources outside of the realm of education provide qualities such as confidence
and social skills that universities are now only are only now beginning to realize as important to teach
right.
I'm warning of that when the when the greater reads it they know they know they're going to get an essay
where the person doesn't completely agree.
OK.
The person doesn't completely agree they're going to get the idea that that idea here is another to
what extent do you agree or disagree.
This is the one about there being funds for postgraduate research and whether or not you should give
it only to science or give it to other sources.
Now here I completely disagree right.
I completely disagree that you should only give it to science and I support giving it to other sources
the next generation of thinkers that pursue postgraduate need support.
If the government and the societies they control desire improvement with this idea of government support
in mind there should be a period of the improvement with this idea of government support in mind.
We have to consider putting all of the funding towards science which is the controversial stance that
some desire provide the entirety of the money towards science is a horrible idea.
As arts and communication are equally deserving of this postgraduate financing all right now we have
the opinion question is the one about living longer today when they are living longer today.
And here is the introduction why people have lives extended further than in the past is a fascinating
and interesting topic.
In the USA studies have shown that people in the eighteen hundreds lived to about 55 and today people
on average live until they are 70.
The reasons for this phenomenon may vary but most likely it is occurring due to medicine and healthy
food.
Here's a another opinion introduction.
This is the one on children spending their free time doing homework.
Is that a good or bad thing and I see it as a bad thing.
In modern times parents are increasingly concerned with the activities of their children after they
finish the school day.
I'm sorry I only read that over in modern times parents are increasingly concerned with the activities
of their children after they finish the school day.
In light of these concerns some parents choose to have them do homework with their free time.
But nowadays there is a there is debate as to whether this has some positive or negative effects after
considering after considering all angles of this controversial question.
The more long term solution is to take the right to take the attention of homework and place them on
the value on it and place it on the value on family time and playing
ok.
Here is a describe or explain introduction.
This is the question is talking about losing natural resources such as forest animals or clean water
we have to choose one resource that's disappearing and explaining why it needs to be saved.
I chose trees and there's the introduction.
There's the outline right down there below on the left side.
And here is the introduction right.
So remember the goal of an introduction is to capture the general idea.
The specific question in your thesis statement is only three things everybody.
We are actively actively losing numerous resources such as forest animals and clean water due to 21st
century individuals and corporations individuals and corporations due to budget constraints and other
priorities.
Governments often must make difficult and controversial decisions on which resources are worthy of protection
from total loss.
Other points of view on this on the most critical resource to preserve very but we must first decide
to safeguard forests since it affects animal habitat and human quality of life.
Here's a discuss both sides.
QUESTION OK computers are being used more and more in education.
Some people say that this is a positive trend while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences.
Discuss both sides
computers have been a part of daily life for about 30 years and touch all parts of society including
education.
There is a general idea general subject.
However the marriage of computers and education has its detractors and champions.
The more convincing argument rests with computer education promoters who look to research in modern
society as key points.
However each side will be given its due in the bare grasp alone.
And now we have a discuss both sides question where we're going to have a separate opinion.
When we write the body paragraphs some people say that it's best to be loyal and work for one company
during one's life.
Others take the opposite view and say it's better to change jobs frequently in one's life.
Discuss the opposite.
Discuss these positions using specific examples of both.
Then tell which one you agree with.
So you know how to talk about both sides.
But also I need to express my opinion the option of changing jobs has never been easier than in today's
world and workers often are torn between staying put or seeking to arise and this new development in
the business world causes much headache but ultimately comes down to a personal decision.
While this paper will outline the points for staying in one company the better option is to change jobs
due to inspiration and new friendships.
Here is a problem solution introduction.
This is the one about the population increasing.
Some say the urbanization process denies us doing our neighbors.
And this causes a loss of community sense.
What is the main problem with this.
And what measures can be taken to overcome it.
There is the outline down there below.
Let's take a look at the introduction for this question for hundreds of years inner city societies have
expanded exponentially and this has resulted in a lack of community connection that we once had in the
old days of villages and towns.
Modern day scholars and politicians have a strong desire to explain the problem of less community and
call on citizens to creatively to creatively enforce solutions to the challenge this essay will explain
in detail how we reduce safety and growth are the problems and community centers and scheduled monthly
activities are potential solutions.
Now with the problems solution question your solutions should address your stated problems.
OK
here is a two part introduction where we're talking about people work because they need money to live.
What are some other reasons that people would discuss one or more of these reasons
motivation to work is a sweet nectar that everyone wants to taste outside of money.
What are some other reasons that push a person out of bed for corporate drudgery.
Various experts would argue for enjoyment family pressure and distraction as additional motivations.
Although these choices will be explored below we will have a very detailed discussion on the work and
on the work motivations resulting from social reinforcement.
Right.
Here is an advantage disadvantage introduction.
This is the one just talking about discuss the advantages and disadvantages of your way of life with
that of your parents
and remember on this one we're doing it in terms of categories in terms of categories where I am taking
a two categories and comparing both sides in those two categories that allows I think for a very focused
essay Here's the introduction.
We cannot possibly imagine what the future generations will find enjoyable but whatever they decide
will be based on past ideas and activities.
The future systems my basic choices of satisfaction around benefits and drawbacks associated with my
peer group lifestyle or my parents.
Considering all angles the next generation will find fulfillment from my time period.
If we examine the strengths and weaknesses related to leader and minority opportunities
now here is another advantage disadvantage is the one about bringing your family along overseas an employee
or student must consider various conditions when moving to a new country and chief among them is whether
to include family on the journey.
Definitely choosing to travel with the wife and kids is ripe with potential benefits and drawbacks.
Without question bringing your family includes more positive such as eliminating homesickness and opportunities
provided.
But we must also address the negatives of expense and distractions related to including family on the
journey.
Various a complete introduction with a thesis statement
so do you have any questions about the introductions.
I hope that you had an opportunity to look at our introductions and now you have a deeper understanding
of how to write a proper introduction for all of the different types of islets task two questions.
Thank you very much and I will talk to you in the next lecture.