OK.
Now let's go ahead and have a look at conclusions.
Conclusions are very very important when it comes to.
Well I mean they're not.
They're not the most important thing.
But you do have to know how to do a good conclusion.
Right.
It may not be worth the most points for an essay.
But you have to do a good conclusion.
And so I want to talk to you about doing that.
Here are the basics when it comes to a conclusion.
You basically basically are going to start off by revisiting your thesis statement going back to your
thesis statement not repeating it word for word but you have to rearrange it or paraphrase it.
And that's going to be at the very beginning of the conclusion and then the rest the conclusion is just
an expansion of giving the reader the relevance or importance of your essay conclusions and also the
implications or suggestions right.
This is the final paragraph right.
This is the final paragraph and you're going to summarize it right here.
OK.
The main parts of a conclusion the thesis statement answer.
All right.
The thesis statement revisited summarizing and giving a significance right the relevance and implications
of the essays findings recommendations suggestions a conclusion is actually the opposite of an introduction
and that with the conclusion you go from specific to general with an introduction you go from general
to specific.
Right.
A lot of a lot of people don't know that is the opposite format of an introduction the opposite format
of the introduction.
Just think about that.
Just think about it.
Think about the format of an introduction generals General specific then thesis statement and then thing
about the format of a conclusion.
You start off by paraphrasing the Visa statement then moving into summarizing the question in the end
your final general recommendations or suggestions.
OK.
OK so the conclusion doesn't carry as much weight as the other as the introduction and definitely not
as much weight as the body paragraphs but you still have to do it correctly and as you learn a little
bit earlier there's a specific way to do a conclusion.
So let's take a look at some of the examples.
All right here's the agree or disagree question about the four time students spending most of their
time studying and they should be doing other activities.
As you know I disagree.
I say this they should only be studying and this is what a good conclusion will look like.
As we can conclude utilizing time for any endeavor outside of studying is wasteful as it prevents acquiring
a high GPA and opportunities that only dedication to studying can provide.
While there may be arguments to support a different position those arguments are not persuasive.
The best recommendation is for a student to solely focus on their coursework.
All right.
And here is a extent to what extent do you agree or disagree.
The qualities a person needs to become successful in today's world cannot be learned at a university
or similar academic institution.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
This is what the conclusion will look like becoming a success in life is the ultimate goal of every
man or woman but many of us do not know the skills to be a success.
Many individuals think that we must go to college to learn everything to become successful.
But this is not true.
Confidence and social skills create a successful life.
Even though they are not absorbed from school
now here is an advantage disadvantage question where we have a separate opinion.
So what I've done here is I separated the opinion and then we gave a conclusion.
Some people think that it is a very good idea to bring your family when you have to travel overseas
to study or work.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages what's your opinion.
Absolutely absolutely.
There are points to be made for the benefits and drawbacks of bringing your family.
In general it is much better.
It is a much better idea to have family included.
Sure there may be distractions and expense but the educational benefits of children and the spouse are
more important than those two negatives.
The best recommendation is to bring them whenever possible to do otherwise invites irreparable harm
to the family and the individual worker.
So you're very clear in my opinion.
The above reference points illustrate the balance point.
Opinions from both sides of view.
Yet when the rubber meets the road with the best decision rests with including family on the journey.
Family is more important than any perceived drawback from having them travel to the new country.
Here is a two part conclusion.
This is the one about needing money to live and if there are other reasons why people work and discussing
a specific one.
This is the conclusion even though most would believe money is the end all and be all to motivate a
worker.
This is not true in all circumstances.
Certainly charity enjoyment a family can act on the same level as money in equal measure.
So far so social reinforcement can act as the provocation to arise and work seven days a week if necessary.
Discuss both sides and discuss both sides.
Conclusion This is the one that's talking about computers being used more and more.
If you believe this is a positive trend or has negative consequences conclusion it is beyond the scope
of imagination that one would actually decide that computers and education are not the perfect marriage.
This is especially true when we consider the research in modern society and adaptation advantages that
come from having computers that give us solutions to the given the give solution to the given negatives
speak towards this debate falling on the side of positive association between computers and education.
Here is a problem solution question about urbanization causing a loss of community sense and what's
the problem with losing community.
And how can we solve it.
Here's the conclusion.
Loss of community is a very serious issue that neighborhoods across the country face.
Absence of community results in less safety and growth but with careful attention we can resolve those
challenges through neighborhood monthly meetings and community centers.
The best option for any community leaders would be to implement these solutions immediately.
Here is an advantage disadvantage conclusion.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of your way of life with that of your parents.
Which one do you think would be best for the next generations.
After reading the above.
Pro and con analysis assorted associated with leisure and opportunities.
Can there be any other choice besides my generation.
Yes you can use the question everybody.
I am certain that my parents generation would find the advantages advanced examination in their favor
but actually their arguments are fairly weak when truly explored.
So if you have any questions about how to do a conclusion please contact me and let me know and I'll
be happy to answer those questions for you.
Thanks a lot and I'll talk to.