WEBVTT 00:00.200 --> 00:05.090 Is use parallelism put those things together and just be careful with your word choice. 00:05.100 --> 00:14.280 But so far as the only real weakness I hear is in terms of word choice and some foundation grammar small 00:14.280 --> 00:18.020 foundation grammar mistakes. 00:18.440 --> 00:23.460 All right now we're going to move in to part number two. 00:23.460 --> 00:26.330 The paper it builds on the front of you. 00:26.440 --> 00:28.050 Yeah. 00:28.700 --> 00:29.350 OK. 00:29.820 --> 00:30.230 All right. 00:30.240 --> 00:38.720 So what's going to happen is I'm going to show you're going to see a question up here on the screen 00:39.360 --> 00:46.350 and you're going to have one minute to consider the question and then you're going to have two minutes 00:46.350 --> 00:47.310 to speak. 00:47.490 --> 00:48.520 OK. 00:49.140 --> 00:49.570 OK. 00:49.710 --> 00:49.980 All right. 00:49.980 --> 00:51.390 Are you ready. 00:51.910 --> 00:52.870 Yes. 00:53.250 --> 00:53.620 All right. 00:53.630 --> 01:04.050 So let me know when you can see my screen. 01:04.070 --> 01:05.220 Can you see my screen. 01:07.290 --> 01:07.650 Hello. 01:07.660 --> 01:09.710 You can see us when I can see. 01:09.750 --> 01:10.150 OK. 01:10.160 --> 01:11.210 Are you have one minute. 01:11.290 --> 01:11.710 Began 02:17.380 --> 02:18.070 OK. 02:18.280 --> 02:19.790 Your one minute is up. 02:19.900 --> 02:24.090 You now have two minutes to speak and you may begin speaking now. 02:29.410 --> 02:32.240 Friends with whom are living with friends. 02:32.290 --> 02:34.480 No it's completely jumbled. 02:34.490 --> 02:36.000 His name is coupledom. 02:36.000 --> 02:41.560 He's basically from Jammu city and he was actually my. 02:41.630 --> 02:43.350 He's actually my ex-colleague. 02:43.400 --> 02:48.780 So my previous office and he's literally a chatterbox. 02:48.890 --> 02:50.420 He talks a lot. 02:50.420 --> 02:57.680 So I was sharing a room with him where I'm staying right now PD and then he got a chance he stopped 02:58.400 --> 03:04.530 to talk or any kind of topic that topic of politics or any kind of thing he didn't do the for. 03:04.530 --> 03:07.820 So then he could get a chance of all sports or something. 03:07.880 --> 03:08.850 He didn't. 03:09.290 --> 03:17.120 It doesn't make any sense whether you want to listen to the discussion but you keep on talking and you 03:17.270 --> 03:19.580 try to explain everything. 03:19.630 --> 03:24.710 I'm He will also take a piece of his walks and try to explain how things are going with his face and 03:24.710 --> 03:28.490 all other stories you love. 03:28.490 --> 03:29.480 He's very talkative. 03:29.480 --> 03:30.540 He loves to talk. 03:30.540 --> 03:34.590 I don't know why but he's a very nice guy. 03:34.880 --> 03:39.190 And yes I like him very much because I have to say. 03:39.270 --> 03:42.600 But you're also right and I'm staying with him right now. 03:42.950 --> 03:50.820 He's very nice person from the heart and I love to listen to go hear the quality of when he speaks and 03:50.830 --> 03:54.640 it just goes on to talk about any particular topic. 03:54.820 --> 04:07.730 He answers we call that discussion a lot of examples with him which is exactly what you will do you 04:07.870 --> 04:11.550 some of them don't listening this new start. 04:11.960 --> 04:15.970 So if I stay out of London for some. 04:16.150 --> 04:18.840 And he's one of our best friends also. 04:21.440 --> 04:22.040 OK. 04:22.310 --> 04:25.980 I'm so glad you finished on time. 04:26.620 --> 04:29.810 You know you finish on time which is good. 04:30.320 --> 04:38.550 I would say you gave you gave the majority of your time to the second question. 04:38.690 --> 04:41.050 What does he or she usually talk about. 04:43.670 --> 04:48.680 And for that question what did you say exactly that he or she talked about 04:52.170 --> 04:58.510 that kind of thing you think like sport politics is it did you say that. 04:58.570 --> 04:58.910 I don't know. 04:58.930 --> 05:00.190 I don't recall. 05:00.520 --> 05:07.560 Yeah I said that he like any kind of topic like politics and politics including a sports people brain 05:07.780 --> 05:09.960 is kind. 05:10.410 --> 05:11.260 OK. 05:11.590 --> 05:13.250 Good good good. 05:13.260 --> 05:17.350 The only thing I would say is you probably wanted to give a little bit more attention to the third part 05:17.470 --> 05:22.270 in terms of the why you like or dislike. 05:22.430 --> 05:22.780 Right. 05:22.790 --> 05:23.210 That's right. 05:23.210 --> 05:24.260 That's what you want to. 05:24.500 --> 05:35.610 You want to try as much as you can to try to give equal attention to all to all three parts if possible. 05:35.610 --> 05:44.390 This this is very this question part number two is very very similar to what people have to do if they're 05:44.390 --> 05:47.630 doing the general letter for the for the General test. 05:47.870 --> 05:52.250 Like when you do and when you're doing the general letter there are like three parts and you want to 05:52.250 --> 05:52.530 give. 05:52.550 --> 05:59.760 You want to try to give equal attention to each part so that you can have a well developed answer. 05:59.760 --> 06:00.540 All right. 06:01.070 --> 06:08.350 But you did or you did a really good job of being able to carry it all the way from beginning to end. 06:08.420 --> 06:14.390 Your fluency was pretty good but still the same things are part number one in terms of some and what 06:14.410 --> 06:17.230 some foundational grammar mistakes. 06:17.540 --> 06:24.290 And when I send you the recording you can listen to it again to try to pull some of that out. 06:24.860 --> 06:30.760 Your your your pace is a little good some too sometimes you're talking a little fast. 06:30.890 --> 06:31.410 OK. 06:31.460 --> 06:39.590 And if you can slow down just a little bit you're going to have more clarity in terms in terms of your 06:39.590 --> 06:42.090 speed sometimes when you go really fast. 06:42.140 --> 06:51.070 Some of your words run together and at the end of your words start to run together that can that can 06:51.070 --> 06:57.500 affect you know the pronunciation or the clarity of the word as being said OK. 06:57.700 --> 07:02.980 So you just want to be careful with that and sometimes that's difficult depending on what culture or 07:02.980 --> 07:10.210 country you come from because some countries there are languages very very fast and sometimes when you 07:10.210 --> 07:12.190 start speaking English you speak English. 07:12.520 --> 07:17.200 At the close of the same speed as you might speak your native language and sometimes you can't do that 07:18.340 --> 07:18.830 right. 07:18.970 --> 07:31.890 So you know I just want to like whenever I get a chance for like 20 minute do so but all the words that 07:31.900 --> 07:42.510 I don't have focus at that time for one minute for all for that one minute and for last minute for the 07:42.580 --> 07:47.280 for the one minute you just want to write down you want to write down two or three ideas for each question. 07:48.650 --> 07:49.430 OK. 07:49.660 --> 07:52.650 Write two or three or two or three ideas for each question. 07:53.230 --> 08:00.580 That's really what you try and then and then explain the next exam don't say exactly if you if you write. 08:00.610 --> 08:06.260 So basically you're ending up with around 10 to 11 sentences. 08:06.700 --> 08:08.120 Yeah right. 08:08.130 --> 08:13.150 You have you have your introduction sentence. 08:13.690 --> 08:19.110 You know you have your your body and then you have your conclusion. 08:19.120 --> 08:23.300 Basically you're speaking a paragraph right. 08:23.490 --> 08:23.930 Right. 08:23.940 --> 08:25.850 That's basically what you're doing. 08:26.350 --> 08:32.160 That's the way that's the that's the mental construct that you want to think about when you're doing 08:32.160 --> 08:38.160 part number two I'm speaking of body paragraph I've got to give an opening topic sentence that I have 08:38.160 --> 08:46.410 to give you the supporting details and then I have to I have to conclude I'm right. 08:46.440 --> 08:52.890 So that's how you want to think about it when you're for your opening sentence you can always open with 08:52.890 --> 09:01.110 a complex sentence or show quality like you could say something like Even though I have a lot of friends 09:01.400 --> 09:03.760 that love to speak. 09:04.260 --> 09:08.680 The one that I'm want to talk about today is my friend John. 09:09.240 --> 09:09.750 Right. 09:09.750 --> 09:16.500 So you know starting starting out you know in a complex sentence form you know at least you're showing 09:16.500 --> 09:19.930 the ability I can do that time and I could do that type of sentence. 09:22.010 --> 09:24.150 And then the way you described them was fine. 09:24.180 --> 09:27.670 Was just you did a pretty good job it is I think that when you got you didn't get it. 09:27.700 --> 09:36.320 You didn't get a chance to really expand the very last part because you started running short and your 09:36.320 --> 09:38.410 time. 09:38.540 --> 09:39.700 Right. 09:40.190 --> 09:42.330 So I'm going to ask you part three now. 09:43.500 --> 09:46.400 OK. 09:46.950 --> 09:47.230 All right. 09:47.230 --> 09:51.530 So let's talk about let's talk about communication. 09:51.640 --> 09:55.170 Let's talk about communication in society. 09:55.210 --> 09:58.140 Do you think that communication is very important. 10:02.360 --> 10:02.980 Yes. 10:03.200 --> 10:12.410 QUESTION That is very important is what I see and let people know that people don't have that much time 10:13.350 --> 10:14.270 to be. 10:14.390 --> 10:21.860 It used to be earlier in the earlier days I still remember these of my friends and even my parents used 10:21.860 --> 10:27.810 to say used to come out in the evening and tried to keep chit chat and communicate with each other with 10:27.890 --> 10:30.240 there talk with friends and everything. 10:30.260 --> 10:33.810 But now people are getting back into their lives. 10:33.930 --> 10:43.490 They are more able to communicate no deal to discuss and they are getting more depressed into their 10:43.490 --> 10:44.110 life. 10:45.030 --> 10:49.450 So I think communication is one of them for you right. 10:49.930 --> 10:51.430 OK. 10:51.540 --> 10:57.720 And in what situations is it helpful to be communicable to be communicative 11:02.180 --> 11:04.770 explained communicative. 11:05.070 --> 11:12.800 If you communicate clearly with different people if you do go to go on to you can't your friends and 11:12.810 --> 11:20.580 if you communicate to dry if you always try to be into words that don't happen for you then on the phone 11:21.080 --> 11:26.090 if we go to a meeting know that anyone going into office. 11:26.220 --> 11:28.050 So he could express it. 11:28.230 --> 11:34.530 So I think that this kind of communication has been really helpful for that girl. 11:34.800 --> 11:36.280 Well he's going to offer his brain. 11:36.280 --> 11:39.160 He's going to any public forum he can speak a lot. 11:39.210 --> 11:43.060 He can discuss about any topic. 11:43.470 --> 11:44.180 OK. 11:44.670 --> 11:49.740 And how can we improve our communication skills. 11:52.890 --> 11:56.970 There are many options available. 11:56.980 --> 11:57.580 No there is. 11:57.580 --> 11:58.990 You can go online. 11:58.990 --> 12:01.150 You can really know what's out there. 12:01.300 --> 12:06.430 You can use people and the technology is out there. 12:06.530 --> 12:13.540 Is handy with the phone smartphone or improvement in communications is not a big problem. 12:13.600 --> 12:20.360 You can go online if you're facing any kind of problem with it and don't ever get up. 12:20.470 --> 12:22.400 If you know what you're looking. 12:22.400 --> 12:31.210 You can go online you can go to Google and you can choose to buy all you can do e-book like this way 12:31.210 --> 12:33.910 you can improve your communication skills. 12:33.910 --> 12:34.480 All right. 12:34.480 --> 12:35.560 Good answer. 12:35.600 --> 12:39.420 But this is this is out this is what I would do so I would say about re-answer. 12:39.610 --> 12:48.220 You literally said the words you can about seven times right. 12:48.220 --> 12:55.600 I mean you you I mean you literally said I lost Cal but you are you can you can you can you can you 12:55.600 --> 12:59.570 can you can you can you can you can you care. 12:59.760 --> 13:00.360 Right. 13:00.550 --> 13:08.400 So you have to to what you've got to work on that definitely leg. 13:08.560 --> 13:11.050 I have only two days left in most people. 13:11.060 --> 13:14.230 So what can be done to improve that. 13:14.390 --> 13:15.880 Not a lot. 13:15.890 --> 13:20.280 The biggest the biggest thing is what you're doing today so you can be conscious of it. 13:21.600 --> 13:26.610 Right right before before before maybe you are conscious that you were doing those things. 13:28.080 --> 13:28.550 Right. 13:28.650 --> 13:29.120 Right. 13:29.120 --> 13:37.320 So I think I think was was helpful is just you know you know even part one all the way to part three. 13:37.410 --> 13:45.190 It's been the same things in terms of your use of word choice parallelism. 13:45.810 --> 13:54.060 Leaving out articles in terms of age and the you know you've got the same consistent thing. 13:54.120 --> 13:59.370 And sometimes what helps you fix it more than anything else is being made conscious that you're doing 13:59.390 --> 14:06.600 the because a lot of times just practicing at home or just practicing and practicing just you're not 14:06.600 --> 14:11.250 aware of what you're doing in your own mind you sound great. 14:11.840 --> 14:12.270 Right. 14:12.310 --> 14:18.340 But a lot of times you don't realize that you're making some small mistakes here or there. 14:18.470 --> 14:18.880 Right. 14:18.880 --> 14:22.980 So I think overall you're in pretty good shape. 14:22.980 --> 14:24.990 I mean I don't know. 14:25.080 --> 14:28.020 There's not a lot you can do within the next two days. 14:28.020 --> 14:36.690 I will say this I will say this when it comes to grading for the graders you know in general I can't 14:36.690 --> 14:40.950 speak for every grader but I'm talking about the ones that I know and the ones that I've talked to on 14:40.950 --> 14:45.230 a regular basis you know they are there. 14:45.240 --> 14:51.680 What impressed is the part that impresses them more than any other part as part number two. 14:51.930 --> 14:55.300 You know part number one is really fairly straightforward. 14:55.590 --> 14:59.620 Part Number three a similar part number one except for the questions are deeper. 14:59.760 --> 15:03.050 And that's that's why you give a longer more extended answer. 15:03.270 --> 15:09.300 But part number two is where you're going to be where the where where are you going to be very impressive 15:09.960 --> 15:11.630 to a greater. 15:11.940 --> 15:15.430 Because part number two is where they leave you alone. 15:15.480 --> 15:19.670 You really are demonstrating your command of the language. 15:19.950 --> 15:25.500 And so if anything I would definitely give a lot of attention over the next two days to part number 15:25.500 --> 15:34.080 two to make sure that you are really able to give a strong part number two because normally after Part 15:34.080 --> 15:41.310 Number one the greater might be on the fence like well maybe six five maybe seven or maybe seven or 15:41.310 --> 15:42.700 75. 15:42.750 --> 15:46.750 They may be on the fence after part after part number two. 15:46.830 --> 15:49.390 They have a good idea of which direction they may go. 15:51.810 --> 15:52.190 Right. 15:52.230 --> 15:57.090 So part number two really is where you show your stuff 16:00.200 --> 16:00.860 OK. 16:01.160 --> 16:02.510 OK. 16:02.930 --> 16:03.940 All right. 16:04.010 --> 16:09.740 In general I think if I were if I were looking at it from a scoring standpoint like I said your weakest 16:09.740 --> 16:16.480 areas are grammar I think of you go to your speaking test and you do it and you have a bad day. 16:16.490 --> 16:19.470 You'll still get something like 6.5. 16:19.490 --> 16:24.190 I think if you go into your speaking test and you have a great day you can get a seven five. 16:24.230 --> 16:31.690 Right so that's the range that you're seeing at your worse and at your best. 16:32.230 --> 16:33.690 But my best day. 16:33.740 --> 16:35.450 Yeah you just need to be your best. 16:35.530 --> 16:40.490 I mean the other thing I think you need to work on is making sure that you paraphrase the language and 16:40.490 --> 16:42.690 the question right. 16:42.740 --> 16:47.690 You know like for example when I say why is this important and you say this is important because try 16:47.690 --> 16:53.960 to paraphrase instead of saying important you can say this is highly valued because this is significant 16:53.960 --> 16:54.980 because. 16:55.160 --> 16:55.630 Right. 16:55.690 --> 17:02.000 I mean like I said those are the kind of things that a speaker that gets a 8 and the nine are able to 17:02.000 --> 17:07.750 do this somebody gets to six or seven are not able to do right. 17:07.910 --> 17:09.340 It's already in my mind. 17:09.380 --> 17:14.370 I mean to paraphrase has past that was the focus. 17:14.940 --> 17:16.870 I don't think at that point. 17:17.030 --> 17:23.050 Well the way the way that you fix that is by when you're practicing. 17:23.640 --> 17:29.790 Sometimes this is what you have to do just what to think about when when you're practicing. 17:29.930 --> 17:33.740 Sometimes practicing is not about answering the question. 17:33.740 --> 17:37.420 Sometimes practicing is about working on skills. 17:37.620 --> 17:38.410 Right. 17:38.590 --> 17:38.920 Right. 17:38.920 --> 17:45.220 So when you're sometimes when you're practicing part one questions or part three questions you might 17:45.220 --> 17:52.380 say OK when I answer these questions for the next 15 minutes I'm actually just going to work on paraphrasing. 17:53.080 --> 17:53.500 Right. 17:53.560 --> 17:57.940 I'm not going to work on you know what I'm saying. 17:58.120 --> 18:02.420 I'm going to work on how I'm saying it and you might. 18:02.560 --> 18:09.270 And so if you just if you just practice using paraphrasing it will become more normal for you. 18:09.440 --> 18:09.710 Right. 18:09.730 --> 18:16.990 But you have to you have to dedicate this specific time to working on that specific skill. 18:17.040 --> 18:17.500 Right. 18:17.530 --> 18:19.610 And if you are or saying OK. 18:19.690 --> 18:26.740 And when I ask when and when I am when I answer these questions I'm going to work on the specific skill 18:26.770 --> 18:34.310 of parallelism right or when I when I answer these questions for the next five minutes I'm going to 18:34.310 --> 18:40.550 really make sure I hit all my articles right. 18:40.610 --> 18:46.330 Sometimes you have to do skittled practice not just what am I saying. 18:46.760 --> 18:47.500 Right. 18:47.550 --> 18:50.330 You understand your answer. 18:50.510 --> 18:50.960 OK. 18:51.020 --> 18:51.390 All right. 18:51.440 --> 18:53.860 So I hope this is very helpful for you. 18:54.150 --> 18:59.490 And once once once I get it produced and everything I'll send you a link Hopefully I can do it later 18:59.490 --> 19:00.220 today. 19:00.510 --> 19:04.930 And so you can listen to it again and I wish you luck. 19:04.950 --> 19:08.920 And do you have any final questions before I sign off. 19:09.130 --> 19:09.690 No. 19:10.210 --> 19:12.370 I think it was here. 19:12.400 --> 19:13.700 Thanks for your time. 19:13.810 --> 19:14.180 OK. 19:14.200 --> 19:17.460 I think for me I read that you're more than welcome have a great day. 19:18.350 --> 19:19.160 You do better. 19:19.190 --> 19:19.860 Thank you. 19:19.860 --> 19:20.590 Bye.